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Old 29th November 2004, 10:39 PM
Anahorish Anahorish is offline
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Of Thursday Night In Newcastle

I left Peter
Mumbling incoherent nothings
And trying to hug me
I would have loved him
But maybe another day
Instead I wandered home
In pouring rain, the night air
Warm with summer
And as Pilgrim Street
Became Northumberland
I saw not a soul adrift
In the empty town
Along Saville Row the flowers
Gave off their nocturnal scent
Intermingled
With the damp summer heat
As midnight edged towards 1
I climbed the steps
And thought of work
But for now the night moves on
In her darkened climes of summer
And I content to be with her.
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Old 29th November 2004, 10:45 PM
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Peter was out on Thursday? I think I know him.
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Old 29th November 2004, 10:50 PM
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Peter was out on Thursday? I think I know him.

LMAO!!

It wouldn't surprise me! I wrote this poem after a work's night out during the summer and Peter was absolutely trollied that night!
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Old 29th November 2004, 10:51 PM
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Hmmm. Did Peter used to work at Marks and Spencers?
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Old 29th November 2004, 11:02 PM
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No idea, I don't think so anyway. But you never know!!
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Old 29th December 2004, 04:17 PM
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pome blind

strong stuff, methinks. Not one for poetry, but yours caught my eye.
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Old 6th January 2005, 11:20 PM
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Awww, thanks!

Eee, I'm chuffed to bits now!
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