Horizon
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I have a good idea for a book. I might need some help writing and stuff. No need to worry about publishing and stuff yet though, but yeah here-
A man named Erik gave up his past regarding Organized crime, and backstabbed the Crime Syndicate, and left with loads of money. He, 1 year later left to Detroit to give the money off and transformed old broken down Detroit into what will be called New Detroit, similar to the looks of LA. He donated all the money he had to it, and became homeless, and no one remembered his name. A few months later, his debts caught up to him, and the Syndicate found him in the streets. He is taken by the Drug Cartel, but is later recognized by some members (David and Travis) in the Syndicate that were his long time friends since Middle School. They take action, because they were like family, and help him escape, and become very wanted by the Syndicate. They survive by unfortunately, stealing from bystanders, and get enough money for clothing, food, and weapons. Only a few weapons though. After defending themselves from some members of the Syndicate, and murdering some members, they gradually get recognized by society and find out that he was the one that made New Detroit exist. Afterwards, the government supply them with weapons, and training to help them with around to take down the mafia all the way in New Mexico. Skipping ahead, the three protagonists overthrow the Crime Syndicate and get all the money, and disposes all their weaponry, gear, and drugs (The Syndicate was involved in drug trafficking) Afterwards, they get all the money, and are forgotten once again. I already written out the ending. Kind of like the epilogue-
We get off the plane, passports in our pockets. Heavy breathing, not knowing if I will regret this decision or not. Stepping outside for the first time, cherishing my first steps in Vietnam. I'm walking down the hall with Trav and David, getting in line for a rental car.
Afterwards, we make it into their capital or town hall or whatever it's calleed, and make it in front of a desk, asking the Lady all dressed up, with her black silky hair tied up. I ask her in Vietnameise, I've been practicing the language after it all ended.
I inhale and Exhale.
I open the suitcase of cold hard cash.
Travis and David are along my side. Nodding their heads in approval, knowing what I'm about to do.
"Where can I give this?"
It's not that good, could use more detail, and maybe some tweaking to make it better, but yeah. Or we could research, to find somewhere in Vietnam, or another country that's broken down, like a Ghetto.
I need a writer that is good, and an artist familiar with photoshop, and also good at drawing.
This is not like a professional project, but if we finish it, we could go around, or start a KickStarter, and try to get it published.
A man named Erik gave up his past regarding Organized crime, and backstabbed the Crime Syndicate, and left with loads of money. He, 1 year later left to Detroit to give the money off and transformed old broken down Detroit into what will be called New Detroit, similar to the looks of LA. He donated all the money he had to it, and became homeless, and no one remembered his name. A few months later, his debts caught up to him, and the Syndicate found him in the streets. He is taken by the Drug Cartel, but is later recognized by some members (David and Travis) in the Syndicate that were his long time friends since Middle School. They take action, because they were like family, and help him escape, and become very wanted by the Syndicate. They survive by unfortunately, stealing from bystanders, and get enough money for clothing, food, and weapons. Only a few weapons though. After defending themselves from some members of the Syndicate, and murdering some members, they gradually get recognized by society and find out that he was the one that made New Detroit exist. Afterwards, the government supply them with weapons, and training to help them with around to take down the mafia all the way in New Mexico. Skipping ahead, the three protagonists overthrow the Crime Syndicate and get all the money, and disposes all their weaponry, gear, and drugs (The Syndicate was involved in drug trafficking) Afterwards, they get all the money, and are forgotten once again. I already written out the ending. Kind of like the epilogue-
We get off the plane, passports in our pockets. Heavy breathing, not knowing if I will regret this decision or not. Stepping outside for the first time, cherishing my first steps in Vietnam. I'm walking down the hall with Trav and David, getting in line for a rental car.
Afterwards, we make it into their capital or town hall or whatever it's calleed, and make it in front of a desk, asking the Lady all dressed up, with her black silky hair tied up. I ask her in Vietnameise, I've been practicing the language after it all ended.
I inhale and Exhale.
I open the suitcase of cold hard cash.
Travis and David are along my side. Nodding their heads in approval, knowing what I'm about to do.
"Where can I give this?"
It's not that good, could use more detail, and maybe some tweaking to make it better, but yeah. Or we could research, to find somewhere in Vietnam, or another country that's broken down, like a Ghetto.
I need a writer that is good, and an artist familiar with photoshop, and also good at drawing.
This is not like a professional project, but if we finish it, we could go around, or start a KickStarter, and try to get it published.
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