Recent content by kircr

I have just read the first 10 pages of your book. You have a great imagination and i know myself how much time and effort goes into writing a book. Like mine your book needs work, but you seem to have a good idea where you want to go with it. I have just been ordered off the computer to watch a...

Cheers for the review. After having some good feed back I have begun to improve the story. I agree my punctuation needs work and I just hope I can do the story that is in my head, justice on paper. :D

Chapter Ten: Forest of Sogno Salatis’ father’s memories had really lifted his mood. Seeing his mother warmed his heart and knowing his father had been in the arena when he defeated Fenderal was important. The loss of control over his powers, however, did concern him and he hoped he...

Chapter Three: Fort Kapici The Lazamerian advance had been slow and sun was directly in front of the legion obscuring their view of the enemy stronghold up ahead. From dawn their path had taken them over grey, gravel hills and down steep loose slopes, before they moved on to flatter...

Thanks for the input. Yep I understand where you are both coming from. The fact I took little notice at school may explain my poor punctuation. You have hit the nail on the head really with the start not carrying enough weight. I have sent the first 3 chapters off a few times and this is my...

I would love some constructive criticism and comments if anybody has the time. Also what age group young adult/ teenager etc: Thank you :o) The Gods There are scriptures found within a magical kingdom called Veneficus that talk of...

HaHa yep cheers mate

I agree. I borrowed my mother inlaws Kindle recently to see what all the fuss was about and was suprised at how good it was, but can not see it taking over an old fashioned book.

Treat everyone as you expect to be treated yourself.

Hi my name is Craig im 35 years old and im a virgin..skip the last bit i was thinking out loud:D