Recent content by loom91

What pay? You can go to bookcrossing.com, register, post a ring request in the bookrings forum stating in the subject that you are a new author looking for critique. All you have to pay is the postage, from then on the book travels and readers post their comments on the books journal page...

I'm a boy and I read voraciously. Anyway, this is a socio-educationa;l issue. Boys are simply brought up in a way that does not foster reading(video games), while girls are brought up differently. Molu

Hi, I was wondering if you could tell me the name of the O Henry story where after his wife's death a man tries to sell her false jewellerys only to fin that they are real and worth a large fortune. Molu

I agree that you are using too many adjectives. I do not mean any offence, but I've noticed that some people think that adding unnecessary poetic adjectives will make their writing more 'literary'. I assure you that these do nothing but enhance boredom. Stick to a lean, trimmed narrative and...