Recent content by Phil Lanuto

Thanks JohnB! I've been tweaking the beginning based on some other feedback I've received. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review it. Phil Monarch http://www.booksie.com/library/index.html/read/7

Zeotrope is a fine place but doesn't really support the critting of novels. TheNextBigWriter is private so you don't loose first rights and it has a much better system for getting a novel critiqued. In terms of Booksie I guess first rights might be a problem if you intend to go the...

This is the first chapter of my horror novel Monarch. I'm posting the rest here at Booksie if you are interested in reading more. Thank you. Phil Monarch by Phil Lanuto Anger. He walked down the high school hallway and felt the anger inside of his veins, inside of his cells, inside...

Hi, I don't have much experience with Youwriteon.com although I have heard it is a pretty good site for feedback. I actually posted my writing on TheNextBigWriter.com awhile ago and received some pretty good feedback. The member base there tends to be comprised of older and more mature...