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The Art of Improvision

A2R.

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Words wither in the mind
In tune, devine, on time they wait to expell
Dared to speak them, they linger
Emotions attach to letters as they roll off the tongue
The body begins its play

An energy released, an energy recieved
The words spoken, but possibly decieved
Stare into the eye of the instrument
Does the music match the maker?
 
One of the few poems ( that I didn't write ) that I like.

I give it not one but two thumbs up.

Couple of word changes I'd make but it works just the same.
 
An exquisite piece, A2R!

Just be mindful of your spelling--i.e. devine/divine, expell/expel, recieved/received, decieved/deceived. Putting all writing through a spellchecker is a beneficial undertaking.
 
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