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I actually enjoyed the structure and flow of the poem. The lines are just a bit too rapish for me.

To get this thread back on topic... Write what you want to write. Don't expect it to sell. If, by chance it sells, then all the better. Don't change your writing style/genre/whatever in an attempt to gain credit. If you change your genre to romance, for example, and you find a willing...

What kind of a response is this? It has nothing to do with the point I'm trying to make. I don't recommend you becoming a professional reader (which means you'd make money reading, by the way). What's the damn point of your posts, Dougie? I don't think anyone here gives a shit.

I meant this in terms of the writing process. Writing with money on the brain leads to crap writing. Look at the degredation of quality among mainstream fiction these days (books where author names are twice as large as their titles). Writing for oneself leads to the purposes of writing you...

Like Tupac... dead.

I agree wholeheartedly. Write for yourself. Otherwise, what's the freakin' point? Money? **** money.

I believe--hence the name of the poem--that all of the lines are borrowed from a Tupac song.

I only have questions for the first two lines. 1. Why is "space" capitalized? 2. What does infinity look like?

Am I missing something?

There seems to be much she said / she saw / she felt / she sat / she stared / she sighed / she glanced / they were / they had / this was / that was / she went / she was..., etc. throughout this first chapter. In fact, within these 618 words, you used the following numbers of each: 38 - she...

Such as...?

True. I was corrupted at birth. I wonder how far Peder would get reading my little story of torture...

"Stigmata" is the plural form of "stigma", as "fish" is the singular form of "fishes". Thine examples are correct, my lord, novella. And it came to pass, thy word hast changed over time to richer language, that or our good shepherd, King James, descendant of Jesus of Al-Qaeda.

Ditto.....

Wow. After reading that, I am a different person altogether. Scarred for life. Desensitized. Sad. I think I'll go kill my family now. Seriously, is that the text in its entirety? If so, what's the big deal?

This isn't the first time "the fish" has retaliated based on religious belief. And he will continue to do so. I happen to choose research prior to stating what is fact, and what is believed to be fact. Since I am God, I know stigmata can appear on fingertips, as well as on elbows, just above...

What's the big deal with the back cover text?

From Dorland's Illustrated Medical Dictionary:

Ages ago. April 21st, 2006.