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I like the poem...a bunch. I think the Aphrodite usage was interestingly amazing, but I have just one problem...it swings around too much at the end. You jump from Aphrodite to an appleseed with very little to connect them. It may confuse your audience. The sensory words are wonderful, and...

I like it. I think it is a good poem, but do think that it needs to be a bit more polished. A few more words of description, more vivid and unnatural words. Words you wouldn't say everyday like etiolated. That'll help. You need to punctuate. Punctuation is essential to poetry because it gives...

O-tay!!!!!!! Lookie at Something. I wrote that just a couple days ago, but no one's posted in it yet. T_T

Girls And Boys - Good Charlotte Oooh, that one matched two. What ya gonna do about that?

Oh my God, I hated that song. And its video was even worse. But I'd have to say the worst one ever would have to be Ok Go's new song. (I don't know the name of it...) But all they do is jump around on treadmills. It's so stupid.

Oooh, that's really cool. You're a great artist.

My family's been trying to tell that to my mom's sister for thirty years, but she hasn't listened to it. She lives in a duplex and pays 780 dollars a month.

Oh my gosh, why is she leaving? She's been so awesome.

This City Is Far From Here - Aiden

Hate it!!!!

No, it's not, but it sounds better! :D Here in the midwest, everything's a little less expensive than in your stuck-up California and England. So HAHA!

Yeah, send a pic for us to see!

Yeah, I know.

Love Like Winter - AFI

Wonderful, now I can keep the stuff in our shed.

Thank you very much, kind Gem. I will send you a thank you chocolate box by return mail.

Level: Advanced Time: None Score: 91 of 120 Estimated Vocabulary Size: 13520 That was hard. I'd never heard of some of those words in there. :) Halo, you must be a supergenius to get only 4 wrong!

Peronel, I have to say I do not understand abstract art. At all. My gifted class went to a abstract art museum close to us, and nearly everyone sat on the floor in the gigantic room and took pictures of each other because nobody could seem to get anything out of it. I don't know what I'm...

I really like Monet and Renoir. We have a few small prints of Monet in our living room, and I love just searching the paintings for things I've looked over. I always seem to find something new.

The ability to be normal...though I doubt that will ever happen. :D Have you ever needed to be bailed out of jail, or the equivalent?