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I truly feel for everyone in London. I know how hard it must be to live in fear. Everyone always says not to live in fear because it's what the terrorist want, but one can't help being afraid to climb on a public bus or an underground subway. Much like I'm terrfied of flying here in the states...

Ok so now I get it. The dog, waiting by the door, jumped and turned looking at his owner over and over. Does this work does this describe the dog was restless or nervous without using adverds. I hope so if I have it right then by golly I finally got it. LOL Thanks

Thanks for that through explenation

Many contemporary writing advice manuals tell us to avoid adverbs and their dubious conspirators, adjectives. Certainly, overuse of adverbs and adjectives make writing unnecessarily verbose and flowery. Often, the use of an adverb or adjective is unnecessary, or even worst, masks an ineffectual...

No thanks. Why would you need my input? My opnion doesn't count.

They sure have appolgized and I thank them for that. I thank you and everyone for encouagment. I don't need a shrink I have my own. Yes writing is fun I'll admit that. It also takes an adult to realize that if you can't do something find something else that strikes your interest. A painter can't...

Thanks for reading my work leckert and thanks for your great input. I really appriciate your time and your talent. I am however not whining. I am simply saying what I feel that no one. I mean no one deserves a whole thread of mocking. I don't understand how the hell you people think here. If...

Thanks Novella that is the type of input I need. I wish you would have told me that earlier.

Novella what don't you understand about my ego? I thought I made it quite clear that I have a very strong ego. I don't take offense to the fact that you or anyone else here does not like my work. I face rejection every day from my mailbox. I take it very well. I have taken your comments and...

Novella I don't mind people telling me that my work is bad. It hurt when my work was mocked by your post. It hurts when people make you the laughing stock of a whole comminuty. I respect each individual here and make every effort to understand that everyone is intellegent in their own way. I...

Thanks motokid. I think that you have to be the only member who is intellegent enough to write inspiring responses like the previous. I will however continue to read because I love it almost as much as I love writing. I will take a break from my writing because I just can't do it. It really...

I do write for myself and it's one thing motokid for people to not like my work, but to all out make fun of someone's efforts at sincere writing is just plain hateful. I would never tell someone to their face that their work is shit. I would however offer advice and suggestions on how to...

I am pleased that my presence on this forum is the laughing stock of other's misery. Thanks for making me look like a complete idiot. I will do one thing for you guys. I will make sure that I never post again on TBF. I will also contact the moderator, and try with every fiber of my being, to...

Thanks Thank you very much for your valued input. Thanks for leaving my blog out of this because I didn't ask your opinion about it. I have taken some time to read some of your posts on this forum and I have noted that your writing is just as frightning to say the least. So IMHO I won't take...

Again a great show of your maturity. Tell me how bad my work is I can take it. Can you dish it out?

Thanks sirmyk for not reading and offering opinions about my work. That is so mighty mature and nice of you. Thanks again! Justin

Inside the Evangeline Parish Sheriff’s office the phones rang off the hook. The dispatchers sat professionally at their desks speaking the constant lingo of law enforcement to the patrol guys in the field. The radios cracked and chirped with static on and off with each remark spoken over the...

Thank you so much Thanks so much for the great insight. I couldn't for the life of me even thought I've read many books over my life span understand or get how the hell was I suppose to make my characters tell the story without using dialouge and sticking with 3rd person POV. The examples...

I've never posted my 2nd chapter of this story before---tell me what you think! CHAPTER 2 Saturday Morning Mrs. Brenda Dupis, of Dupis’s Grocery, looked anxiously up at the clock on the wall. It was 9:30. No Brandon in sight. Today was the big spring sell in March. She needed all of her...

Thanks guys Thanks for all the information and the time you guys spent pointing out things that needs changing. I am working on showing not telling but that seems akward to me and I don't really get it but I'll try. Thanks again! Justin