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Here is the other form Please tell me which one to go with. Thanks ***************** PROLOGE As hours of darkness neared, the hospital lights peered through the dusk of the small now desolate town of Ville Platte. Eric Doucet awoke from a much needed cat nap. He had not left his...

I have been putting together a novel. It is a murder mystery. I have been toying around with point of view. Below I have posted my Prologe. Please tell me which sound better or which flows better. Thanks: PROGLOGE I ran out of the room and left my whole family behind to call the nurse. I...

Thanks Thank you for your words that made my day. I actually started to change it up a little as so not to use the I so much. This is actually a murder mystery. If you would like to read more and give me your advice let me know. My email is laboi_22@yahoo.com Thanks again!

Thanks so much Cathy Thanks for the sound advice I will be sure to use it!

I am writing a novel. My question is should the novel always say I? Or should it say he? Read the following please: PROGLOGE I ran out of the room and left my whole family behind to call the nurse. I didn’t know why I left the room and out into the lonely, smelly hospital halls for the...

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I am an aspiring writer needing a few pointers. I just finished off a mystery novel titled "The Gift". I have never been through the ringer with publishers before and I know its hard to get published. Everywhere I have read while conducting research suggests that I get and agent. Is this...