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I concur, very good, very interesting. I think you might want to have a look at the first paragraph again - it seems a little unwieldy. Once you get into the second paragraph, your style has a more natural flow. Personally, I don't like overly long sentences, especially at the beginning of a...

Yes, it was rather sad. You just wanted poor little Hans to wake up and see what was going on. I guess there were two lessons to be learned from that story - don't take advantage of your 'friends', and don't let your 'friends' take advantage of you.

That's a beautiful story, Klunker. Thank you for sharing.

Nice, thanks for the post.

No, my teens will still want candy, but that's about it. Again.

Back to topic, any more suggestions?

To listen to in the car, no, but live performances, yes. Same.

Bravo, many would not be able to accept criticism so well.

Awe, he's cute, looks like he'd be into everything.

Did you take that yourself? ;)

If you can figure out how to do that, please let us know :) Last performing arts show you attended?

Funny, I didn't find it dark - a little sad at times but mostly hopeful, I would say, and filled with a bit of wonder, which you would normally expect from a circus. I doubt it's any darker than House Harkonnen.

Tap - it's more eco-friendly. Last time you went swimming in a natural body of water?

Indeed. Luxury at its finest. Coke or Pepsi?

For fantasy romances, try Jayne Castle's books. A lot are available in audio on Overdrive.

Does he go riding with you?

Sure . . . CFSM! Hence the pirate fish.;) Again.

The Night Circus by Erin Morgenstern - beautifully written, I was really impressed by her writing style and imagery. And the story is enough to keep you entertained as well. http://www.amazon.com/The-Night-Circus-ebook/dp/B004J4WKTW/ref=dp_kinw_strp_1

Short on men, but not too short. Do you volunteer?

Hello and welcome :)