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Heylas Welcome! Hope you like it here. ^_^

I don't want to say it's not erotic, but I'm a little overused to Black Lace's brand of eroticism. I would make it a little more smooth, focus more on how they feel than what they do, if you're trying for a truly erotic scene. For one thing, you're going to have to try to get a mostly straight...

I'm so perfect that sometimes, people commit suicide when they meet me and realize they'll never attain perfection such as mine.

Aww! Now, see, that's putting things almost cutely for a feller who writes about orgies, cannabalism, and castration. ;)

Very nice. I especially like the shattering tears bit. It makes me picture glass falling from her eyes and stuff, and that makes me picture a whole lot of ice, and that makes me picture a huge forest in the dead of winter. How two words make up that much imagery, I don't know.

Christian Woman is my favourite of theirs, though I don't care for either of the videos very much. Lenny, you're extremely lucky.

That's an interesting idea. Wrong, but interesting.

'Ello! See, I'm exactly the opposite. I like chaos in some things, but for the most part, I like things all nice and neat and lined up perfectly. Same colours should go together, along with the same sizes and shapes. At the same time, of course, I keep pushing my mother to get a whole...

I'm...not mining. Actually, I'm offering my opinion. See, the thing about a showcase is that we're not here to kiss your ass. You need to grab ahold of that fact.

Hee! Thank ya.

I was extremely unimpressed with A Painted House, but I actually rather like the one I'm reading now of his, The Runaway Jury. I was shocked that I liked it at all, and even while I'm reading it, I'm a bit unsure. Things move very slowly, but somehow the way things are written keeps my...

Hee, there certainly is, but it's really long and drawn out, and not as interesting as it might seem. ::smiles::

It depends on the books/series.

It depends on the book. If it's a book that I'm trying to get information out of, like the ones I've been reading about astral projection, then even though they have a storyline, I'll take longer. If I'm tired, it'll take longer. But if it's by an author I worship, like Terry Pratchett, then...

My Master's nickname for me is Rien. It means "nothing" in French, and is a sort of contradiction. Before, I was nothing of importance to him, and now I'm everything. ^_^ I call him Dieu.

Very interesting way of working it. I must say, it does come out quite chaotic, and although chaos generally isn't my style--I like for thoughts to flow smoothly together--this grabbed my attention anyway. So you must be doing it very well.

I go by a mixture of publishers, authors, recommendations, and reading a random page to see if it looks good.

Shockingly, I can actually find only one "flaw" in this, and that's just opinion. The use of "twerp" throws your first paragraph off. I really like the last paragraph.

Hee! I am overwhelmed by the cuteness of this poem.

You need to work on rereading your entries before you post them (eg: 'a senator he referring to as Mattie' doesn't really work). Otherwise, this ain't half bad.