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Wonderful I loved it. The prose is fluid and tight, the story carrying me from the first line to the last. The best praise i can give is to say that i wish i'd writen it. A quick question. How long is the piece. I had to post a 2000 word piece in three seperate parts because gteh site only...

Hi Hi, Good site isn't it. What are you reading and is it any good?

The dreaded block Hi, I have read your piece. Of all the parargraphs i'd have to say i thought the last was the best. I have written two novels so far and am currently working on my third, so (for what its worth) i'd have to say that it is very important to find a flow when writing. The...

Back at ye How do you like the new Harry book. I finished a couple of weeks ago.

A pounding on his chest suddenly brought Paul around again. “We’ve got him,” one of the men said. Paul wondered who they were talking about. Then the other man produced a long syringe and jabbed into Paul’s arm. There was no pain, in fact Paul could not feel anything anymore. He looked up onto...

approach his girl in such a manner and certainly not in public. Even now Paul could see a thousand hungry eyes watching the trio, judging them, waiting to see Paul’s reaction to this usurper. He had to act now, his reputation demanded it. He began to move; his eyes focused only on Mark as he...

From horizon to horizon, clouds, dark and heavy, like recently inflicted bruises, rolled in tortured pain across a heavy night sky. Their swollen membranes no longer able to contain their burden, cascaded a myriad of cool crystal droplets down onto the cold hard concrete of the city streets...

Clearing the block Hi, I have written two novels and lie all writers suffer from teh dreaded block from time to time. The best solution i can give you is to BRAINSTORM. Normally this involves several people but as a writer i have found i can do it on my own. Either with a pen and paper or just...

I agree that the battle scene could have been better but i suppose it was always going to take place at Hogwarts. I think she made the right descision by killing of one of the twins. One of teh Weasleys had to go just for balance but i always though it would be Percy. As for Mrs Weasley killing...

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