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Hi I would be really grateful if you could provide feedback on my first few chapters. It's a murder mystery set in heaven... ONE When is dead not dead? Is it when the blood continues to rush and the lungs still blow, when the cold still bites and the noise keeps on at just a decibel too...

Hi I would welcome any feedback on my first adult crime novel. Thank you very much! *************************************************** Chapter One 4.11pm Friday I sat in the car with the weighty door pushed open to its limit, my legs dangling, the last few draws of a cigarette...