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It's sad, the fate his later books have fallen to compared to his first few. Choke was his apex of his career thus far, one I don't think he'll ever top. He just seems to be "stuck" more or less in the mode that gave him praise initially. Now it just feels contrived.

Again, this is excellent work and you are a great, great writer. My only critique like last time is the incorrect format of quotation punctuation. You definitely will want to change that before you continue writing, as it will be a pain to do if you complete the entire book before doing so.

Oh, sorry. You can download the song from here. It's the single from the album, Paperwork.

Volcano! - Africa Just Wants to Have Fun perfect songwriting and perfect lyrics, look: AFRICA JUST WANTS TO HAVE FUN Sick of your crucificool Cootchy-coo, look at you, cootchy-coo, look at you, and you’re a Heck of a champion too Hands to god, ‘rena rock, hold the poor, in...

Volcano! - 78 Oil Crisis listen to their lovely lovely music... a lonely, disrupting concert at night

I read through it all. Wow. You're one incredible writer. Everything flowed steadily like a metronome and the amount of reality you induce is breathtaking to say the least. My only critique is format of quotes. If you're starting a sentence with a quote, followed by "____ said", you...

I C wut U did thur Anyways, I'll read this later, but right now it looks like a giant wall of text! But I have to say, the first sentence is absolutely gorgeous.

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I like this. The recurrence of the word "Alone" should be dispersed more throughout the piece, though, as I feel it would give the poem a bolder structure, thus evoking a more powerful emotion.

I'm just wondering, why is it that you only have the first chapter here if you've got much more complete?

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Readers do not need to know that extra information, even if it's told in first person. It's unneeded and it doesn't develop the plot or theme. A good storyteller doesn't provide the reader with pointless details. Emotions are what give characters the ability to connect to the reader. If no...

Indeed. :)

I went into those artists when I was younger believing they would be the best thing imaginable for music. They weren't, but I was in some sort of thought process that all good music was that of classic rock... when in reality, in my perspective, 99% of classic rock is just as lame as the music...

And thanks for the corresponding thoughts of translated work. I agree, it's better to at least have read a variation of great work than not read it at all.

I noticed most of those authors have books translated from different languages. While I'm keeping note of the authors, which I will definitely read, sometimes I fear that some eloquence is lost when litereature is translated, but that's kind of naive because I know for certain some books have...

Thanks! The book looks very interesting, and I like how Mitchell writes. Reviews of the book look really nice, too. As for Salmon Rushdie, I've read that and yes it is quite good, but to digress, I have to say that his most-recent material hasn't been very enthralling. It's sad, too...

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