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Thank you for your reply fleuretta :). Well the whole piece is about these parents realizing that their son isn't a child anymore. They realize that he is now a man and not the child that walked "beneath the low limbs". Parents go through this phase (at least, most do) and start really...

Hello all. I just finished a new story and I would love to hear what you all think about it. I've been trying new things recently, and this time, I really wanted to focus on dialog. Please give any criticism or praise kindly. Thank you and enjoy...

Hey Dave :) Sorry that no one has answered yet. I hope I can help. Well Dave, I believe you have a great base poem here. With the proper revisions, this poem could shine very brightly. Your poem seems to be anchored on the rhyme scheme. This, to me at least, is the main cause of the...

Hello all. I just made some revisions to this short story and I would love to hear what you all think about it! It isn't the happiest of prose but I hope you like it! Make sure and let me know of anything that might make it better. Thanks again. RF =========================================...