Hi, I'm new to this forum and to writing in general, note that i have never written before and English is not my main language, but i'll try my best.
This is just a scrap of the beggining of a novel, before going on with the rest i would like to hear feedback to improve from the start and therefore make the rest in a better way. Please be nice and give constructive feedback both in grammar and storytelling techniques.
Thank you very much for your time.
This is just a scrap of the beggining of a novel, before going on with the rest i would like to hear feedback to improve from the start and therefore make the rest in a better way. Please be nice and give constructive feedback both in grammar and storytelling techniques.
Thank you very much for your time.