third man girl
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Originally posted by funes
I really dislike it when an author names any product by brand
What if it's really, really relevant? For instance, Mars bars. What other chocolate bar dunks into coffee as satisfactorily as Mars bars dunk into coffee?
He dunked his Toffee Crisp into his coffee, stirred and sucked.
And the crispie turned soggy.
He dunked his Bounty into his coffee, stirred and sucked.
And finished with a good flossing.
He dunked his Smarties into his coffee, stirred and sucked.
And reached for a sieve.
He dunked his Toblerone into his coffee, stirred and sucked.
And chipped his tooth, prising the wedges apart.
He dunked his Mars bar into his coffee, stirred and sucked. Dunked and sucked, again. Dunked and sucked . . .
Sorry, only 'Mars bar' works for me.
Third Man Girl