LadyAwesome
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This isn't anything I'm working on, but I just want to see what people think of my writing style, I want to know if it's captivating. NOTE: this is all off the top of my head.
The sky was dark and the night still, one could tell by the eery silence that something had happened... or was happening. I could feel it too as I slipped out of my master's bedroom window; the moon was calling to us all. I could hear my clanmates call, and I couldn't help but call to them as I ran across the open field behind my Dayhome. At night, the world was my home.
I could smell everything, I could hear everything, and I could taste the excitement of the hunt that was soon to begin. Zufang, the alpha male, was the first to come into my sight, he was an Alaskan Malamute with a showcase coat. And, believe it or not, the Alpha queen was a Miniature Pinscher. Her name was Bronzepaw, and she was a force to be reckoned with.
You see, we are not wolves; we are dogs, we are Dogs of the Moon.
The sky was dark and the night still, one could tell by the eery silence that something had happened... or was happening. I could feel it too as I slipped out of my master's bedroom window; the moon was calling to us all. I could hear my clanmates call, and I couldn't help but call to them as I ran across the open field behind my Dayhome. At night, the world was my home.
I could smell everything, I could hear everything, and I could taste the excitement of the hunt that was soon to begin. Zufang, the alpha male, was the first to come into my sight, he was an Alaskan Malamute with a showcase coat. And, believe it or not, the Alpha queen was a Miniature Pinscher. Her name was Bronzepaw, and she was a force to be reckoned with.
You see, we are not wolves; we are dogs, we are Dogs of the Moon.