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“I Saw Mommy Killing Santa Claus” is George Baxt’s short story in the collection edited by Cynthia Manson and published in 1990 as MYSTERY FOR CHRISTMAS.

Oscar Leigh remembers and tells the story of his mother, Desiree Leigh, inventor of Desiree skin rejuvenating cream. She parleyed the cream into a multi-billion dollar cosmetics empire. She’d stolen the formula from Professor Desmond Tester and shot him on Christmas Day when he discovered and confronted her with the theft. Oscar sees her shoot Tester, who’s dressed in Santa costume to entertain the poor children invited to his home and laboratory for the Christmas dinner of turkey and all the trimmings. She sends Oscar to the basement lab to discover his body, after which she tells the police of Tester’s ex-mistress who shot him. Because the police cannot find the murder weapon, they reluctantly accept the Laurette theory, and Desiree goes on to bigger and better things. How?

Not particularly Christmas-y or memorable. (C)
 
“Kelso’s Christmas” is the short story by Malcolm McClintick in MYSTERY FOR CHRISTMAS, edited by Cynthia Manson, published in 1990.

Sergeant George Kelso’s looking forward tot the afternoon off when he and Detective Sergeant Meyer are called to investigate the stabbing death of Santa Claus in the gift wrapping department of a busy store. Arnold Wundt had been one of the store’s accountants, divorced, a nonsmoker and nondrinker without many friends or enemies. Briggs, the assistant manager, tells Kelso that he’d examined Wundt’s books and discovered that he’d embezzled over $100,000 from the store. Kelso’s questions lead him to set a trap for the killer, whom he catches just in time to play Santa for the remainder of his afternoon off.

An average story, nothing outstanding. (C)
 
Linda Haldeman’s “The Marley Case” is one of the short stories in the MYSTERY FOR CHRISTMAS anthology edited by Cynthia Manson, published in 1990.

The unnamed narrator, having enjoyed seeing two of his children in a local production of A Christmas Carol, begins a discussion of the cause of Marley’s death that morphs into a visit to the London of December 24, 1836, in company with Marley’s ghost and the Ghost of Christmas Past. There he observes the Christmas scene and Marley’s death, brought about by a person and method undisclosed by Charles Dickens.

The plot has an interesting cause of death, the narrator’s character is intriguing, but the sense of place is outstanding, especially considering the short story length. “Leadenhall, that was the name of the street, between two churches, St. Michael Cornhill to the west, its solid, rectangular, pinnacled tower standing out above everything, and to the east St. Andrew Undershaft, the site, it is said, in older times of a gigantic maypole. It is the churches, the ubiquitous churches, that gives the City of London its illusion of timelessness. The London I now stood in was older, dirtier, and even more charming than the one I had known.” (116)

Atmospheric description adds to the sense of place: “...this was almost too much city for even me, noisy beyond belief, with the clatter of donkey carts and hackneys and great lumbering omnibuses over the stone paving, the shouts of peddlers urging their wares on the passerby, and the intermittent clanging of bells. I counted the chimes of the hour coming from St. Michael’s tower with some surprise. It was only three o’clock, yet it was dark enough for the gas lamps to be lighted. The air was thick with an oppressive dark green smog that penetrated everywhere but softened the roughness of the street life as if wrapping it in gray-green chiffon.” (116)

A first-class seasonal story. (A) :welcome
 
Anthony Boucher’s “Mystery for Christmas” is the title short story in MYSTERY FOR CHRISTMAS, the collection published in 1990, edited by Cynthia Mason. It’s set in Hollywood about the time talkies came into the film industry.

Mr. Quilter argues with “creative genius” Aram Melekian over changes needed in his film script. In a fit of pique, he tells Melekian he can take any man off the street and coach him into producing a script that will be purchased. He’s knocked down in a fit of abstraction by a young police officer Tom Smith, who wants to be a writer and who agrees to work with Quilter. His story is The Red and Green Mystery by Arden Van Arden, the story of the jewel robbery at Beverly Benson’s Disney-themed Christmas party. She’s a passe film star who owns a fabulous ruby and emerald necklace that she discovers during the course of the party has been stolen.

“Mystery for Christmas” is the most dated of the stories in MYSTERY FOR CHRISTMAS. There’s almost no characterizaton, the plot is one that’s been done in dozens of B movies, and there’s no particular sense of place or time. Sorry to say, this one seems to be included solely for the author’s name. (D-)
 
“On Christmas Day in the Morning” is Margery Allingham’s Albert Campion short story included in MYSTERY FOR CHRISTMAS, the anthology edited by Cynthia Manson and published in 1990.

Campion is enjoying a Christmas house party with Sir Leo Persuivant when Superintendent Bussy comes to report on a death that couldn’t have happened but did. Making his Christmas morning rounds delivering mail, Fred Noakes is run down and killed. Police stop a car driven by two drunken criminal types seen driving erratically, but where they were observed and where Noakes was found are not the same. It takes Campion’s keen eye at an isolated cottage to discover how the seeming impossibility occurred.

Very slight story with little characterization or atmosphere, but an interesting plot twist. (B)
 
This short story officially concludes my holiday-themed reading for 2014.

James Powell’s short story “The Plot Against Santa Claus” is one of the short stories in the collection edited by Cynthia Manson and published in 1990 as MYSTERY FOR CHRISTMAS. It’s set in Santa’s North Pole workshop in the days before Christmas.

I’ll not assign a grade to “The Plot Against Santa Claus” because I’m not going to finish the story. It involves political and economic unrest among the elves as revolutionaries want to maintain the old standards of construction while the Establishment cuts corners and costs to turn out quantities of toys, rather than quality. Two attacks have been made on Santa Claus himself, one a bomb brought into a Board meeting and left under the table at his feet, the other cyanide in his eighth (or was it ninth?) martini. Chief of Security Rory Bigtoes is responsible both for keeping Santa safe and for discovering who’s behind the attempts.

To be effective, whimsy needs to be used in small doses, and I am admittedly whimsy-impaired, but too much already. “The Plot Against Santa Claus” is one of the longest stories in MYSTERY FOR CHRISTMAS, carried on far longer than the conceit can hold up. Frankly, it becomes tedious.
 
Anthea Fraser’s ONE IS ONE AND ALL ALONE is part of her mystery series featuring Detective Chief Inspector David Webb of the Shillingham Police Station. It was originally published in 1996 and reissued in e-format in 2014.

David Webb’s friend DCI Malcolm Bennett of the Lethbridge Police Station is not very happy in his second marriage. He married soon after his first wife Carol died of multiple sclerosis, not her sister Barbara as his children (and she) expected, but Una, a woman he’d met on holiday in Scotland. None of his three children accept Una. Other tensions include youngest daughter Jane’s discovery that her boyfriend Steve is involved in theft from the supermarket where he works; older daughter Sally’s husband Neil asks for, and doesn’t get, £5,000 to replace money he’s used from clients’ accounts to play the stock market. Webb and Bennett both are involved in hunting a gang of four doing strong-arm robberies from shops. Then Malcolm Bennett is beaten to death in his own home while Una is away at a concert. The most important thing taken is a bloodstone ring Una had given him. Is Malcolm’s death connected to a current or recent case, or is it personal, within the family? And why was Neil Crawford stabbed to death in Una’s office building? Are the deaths connected? How?

The plot is straight-forward police procedural, with fair play in giving the reader information as it turns up. By using frequent changes in point of view between family members and Webb, Fraser avoids the need for large chunks of exposition to advance the plot. However, two or three chapters contain the killer’s point of view and, instead of heightening tension, slow the development. Despite one early mention of what turns out to be the motive, the identity of the killer comes out of left field.

Characterization is good. David Webb is believably human. “Grimly, methodically, Webb prepared himself for what lay ahead, forcing down the personal loss to make way or a cold, balanced professionalism. And gradually, beneath the shock and grief, a deep, implacable anger began to grow. He welcomed it. It would make things easier.” (61-2) Fraser is adept at using atmosphere to reveal character: “Webb called in at Carrington Street the next morning. There were more people about than was normal for a Sunday, but the atmosphere was subdued, everyone going about their business with none of the usual quips. There was, however, a noticeable feeling of companionship, a drawing together in their shocked grief. Not many of them had known Malcolm personally, Webb realized, but in death, he was one of them, an upholder to the best of his ability of law and order, who had been brutally struck down. One and all, they were determined to avenge him.” (69)

Fraser also does a good job of establishing Broadshire as a genuine place. “The road from Shillingham was cross-country, along one of the valleys of the Chontock Hills which bisected the county. It was a pleasant drive on a windy spring day with lambs in the fields and a wash of new green along the hedge-rows. Various roads led off to nearby villages--Chedbury, Chipping Claydon, Beckworth--all of which, Webb reflected philosophically, had offered up their share of corpses over the years. And the countryside looked so peaceful. Steep-gabled farmhouses, woods and roadside stalls of daffodils were interspersed along the way with more prosaic petrol stations and several inviting-looking pubs, most of which Webb could personally vouch for. Eventually the houses became more numerous, the traffic heavier, and he found himself entering the outskirts of Lethbridge.” (43)

ONE IS ONE AND ALL ALONE is well-written. (A-)
 
Dell Shannon’s short story “The Clue” is one in her collection MURDER BY THE TALE published in 1987. It features Lt. Luis Mendoza of the LAPD Homicide Squad.

Luis is about to begin a poker game when Sgt. Art Hackett calls him in on a murder. Tommy Barron, a criminal defense attorney who’s gotten off many men arrested by the squad, has been arrested for the murder of a professional gambler Jason Barker. Barron and his friends had lost largely in a poker game to Barker; Barron went to his hotel to pay up his $1,200 in cash, only to have Barker shot in the back by a Colt .45; Barron bolted, and witnesses grabbed him in the hallway. But he claims he didn’t shoot Barker. Mendoza is inclined to believe him because he’s too smart to have committed a murder that way. The other men involved in the poker game are alibied, as is the hotel guest to whom the gun is registered. So, who? Mendoza uses a comment about Barker as a womanizer and another about lipstick to identify the killer.

Luis Mendoza is one of my favorite fictional detectives. Dell Shannon gives him enough quirks and baggage to be believable: “He replaced the phone, automatically lining it up nice and neat with the desk box and blotter. One of the reasons Luis Rodolfo Vicente Mendoza had a little reputation as a detective: the thing all untidy irritated him as much as the crooked picture or the wrinkle in the rug, and he had to get it all neatly straightened out.” (19-20)

Shannon’s plots in the Mendoza series are strictly police procedural, and she builds them logically and fairly. “The Clue” is well worth the time. (A)
 
DEAD ON COURSE is one of J. M. Gregson’s Lambert and Hooks mystery series. It was originally published in 1991 and re-issued in e-book format in 2014. It features Detective Superintendent John Lambert and his legman Sergeant Bert Hooks.

Guy Harrington, a tycoon businessman, is having a golfing holiday with three men: Tony Ward, sales manager for the plastics division of his company; Sandy Munro, engineer whose work he passes off as his own; and George Goodman, architect who sometimes designs building projects for Harrington. They are accompanied by Munro’s wife Alison, an English beauty, and Tony’s fiancee Meg Peters, formerly Harrington’s mistress. All have reason to hate and despise Harrington, so when his murdered body turns up on the Wye Castle golf course, they’re the obvious suspects. Marie Harrington, his wife, arrives unexpectedly at Wye Castle, coming as soon as she’d received the news of his death to identify the body and perhaps to be certain Guy really is dead. She tells Lambert point blank that she isn’t grieving and won’t grieve over Guy, and she’s happy he’s dead. As Lambert investigates, he discovers many secrets and there’s another murder before he identifies the killer.

The plot is police procedural format, with Gregson playing fair about giving all information as it’s uncovered. The identity of the killer and the motivation are adequately foreshadowed, though Gregson does keep attention focused on suspects with more immediate quarrels with Harrington.

Gregson has created in Lambert and Hook another of the detective duos whose whole is greater than the sum of its parts. Enough family life and personal background are given to establish both as believable human beings. “There was a sudden, sick excitement in the air: [Lambert] felt that the people around him realised that the murderer, if murder this was, was probably in this room. And as he took covert notice of the responses around him, he was aware of his own excitement too. The old adrenaline as the manhunt began: after twenty years he was still not sure whether it was a thing of shame or a necessary adjunct of his calling.” Hook, raised in an orphanage, is going for an Open University degree, reading Humanities. Other police and the suspect are also authentic. Shifting point of view between characters helps both to reveal character and to avoid large chunks of exposition.

Sense of place is outstanding. “[The Way Castle complex] was no more than a pleasant eighteenth-century mansion, distinguished chiefly by the superb position of its escarpment above the river. The nineteenth-century owner, under the medievalism of the romantic poets and the more questionable suggestions of the Gothic novel, had added the castellations and the random turrets. These not only ruined the original Georgian simplicity of the design but caused expensive problems of maintenance, once the estate ceased to employ its own builders and carpenters and men ceased to be cheaper than horses to maintain. Floodlit against a starry sky, the ivy-clad elevation of this mongrel building had a brooding menace that suggested Psycho more than Childe Roland.”

Gregson’s Lambert and Hook is a strong series, and DEAD ON COURSE is a solid addition to it. (A-)
 
“The Cat” is one of the short stories in Dell Shannon’s collection MURDER BY THE TALE, published in 1987. It features Lt. Luis Mendoza of the LAPD Homicide Squad.

Sergeant Art Hackett calls Mendoza in immediately on the murder of Ethel Gibson because her husband John Gibson, the obvious suspect, is an eleven-year veteran of the LAPD. They’d quarreled loudly, he’d slammed out, and when Gibson returned the next morning, he found her and his cat Queenie beaten to death. Based on Gibson’s reaction to a cat Mendoza borrowed to test him, Mendoza is convinced of his innocence. But who? Why? Mendoza uses a home-made shiv found in the backyard and Gibson’s losing his keys the week before the murder to identify the killer.

Mendoza has enough personal idiosyncrasies to be believable. He is most definitely a cat person: “In seventeen years on the force, he’d learned to watch his overactive imagination, but not always to control it. He hunted down the felons because it was his ob, not always feeling any personal animosity toward them; but this one he wanted to find and see him punished adequately. Not, God knew, for Ethel Gibson the nagging wife. No. For the pretty silver-gray almost-Persian, whom Gibson had loved. The innocent creature struck down with no motive but brutality.” (38)

Excellent story. (A)
 
Dell Shannon’s THE RINGER is one of her Luis Mendoza series published in 1971. Lt. Mendoza is head of the Los Angeles Police Department’s Central Homicide Squad.

It’s difficult to summarize the plot of any of Shannon’s police procedurals because, like real life police work, the detectives are working multiple cases and none are assigned to specific cases. In THE RINGER, there’s the unexplained death of Luisa Fantini, usherette in a theater found dead from a fall out of the balcony; the beating death of Carolyn Katz, killed in her apartment without sexual assault or robbery; the murder of Harriet Hatfield, a middle-aged woman with no enemies and no physical evidence to indicate her killer; a car-theft ring stealing cars in Los Angeles and reselling them back East; a hit and run; an elderly woman killed in her bed; and more. The title comes from one of the car thieves identifying Detective Tom Landers of the Homicide Squad as “Speedy,” one of the bosses in the car theft ring. Internal Affairs tries to take over; Mendoza is having none of it, knowing Landers, but it’s Officer Phillipa Rosemary O’Neill, computer operator in Records whose idea and investigating clear him.

Part of what I like so much about the Mendoza series is the glimpses of family life and personal feelings of the men in the Homicide Squad. All are believably human, and their lives progress between the episodes Shannon chooses to record. The focus is on Luis Mendoza, as head of the squad: “Quite suddenly--[Hackett and Higgins] had both seen it happen to him before--he was all lit up, on top of the world. It always affected him like a stiff drink, a thing like this: Mendoza seeing right to the truth of some little puzzle, the X-ray vision. And he was still fussing about Landers, too, but he couldn’t help the extra adrenalin shooting through him, the essential egotist Mendoza clearing up the little problem with a flick of his mind.” (120)

THE RINGER is an oldie but goodie. (A-)
 
Miranda James’s CLASSIFIED AS MURDER is one of her Cat in the Stacks mystery series published in 2011. It features as first person narrator librarian Charlie Harris and his Maine coon cat Diesel.

Charlie Harris has known James Delacorte for some time, helping him with searches for information in the library at Athena, Mississippi, so when he asks Charlie to inventory his rare book collection for missing volumes and offers generous compensation, Charlie accepts. He (and Diesel, who accompanies him almost everywhere) work one morning, returning after lunch to find James Delacorte dead at his desk. Someone gave him cookies containing peanuts, to which he had been violently allergic. That person is almost certainly a member of his household: his hypochondriac sister Daphne Morris; his supercilious nephew Hubert Morris; Hubert’s wife Eloise, who’s mentally disturbed; Delacorte’s great-niece Cynthia Delacorte, a nurse but also an ice queen; his great-nephew Stewart Delacorte, chemistry professor at Athena College and outrageously gay; and Nigel Truesdale, English butler who’s been with Delacorte for more than forty years. Chief Deputy Kanesha Berry, who’s worked with Charlie before, asks him to complete the inventory, to determine if theft from the collection is a possible motive for murder. Charlie discovers that a set of thirteen William Faulkner novels, personally inscribed and signed, worth some $750,000, and a recently acquired copy of Edgar Allan Poe’s Tamerlane are missing. In the meantime, someone gives Eloise, who’s also allergic to peanuts, contaminated cookies. Is there one criminal or two? Is the murderer also the thief?

The plot is simplistic for a careful reader. There’s only one reasonable candidate for the theft of the books, and Eloise specifically says who provided Delacorte’s cookies. It could easily be cut by fifty pages without damaging the story line. The conclusion is a bit unsatisfactory since some of the provisions of James Delacorte’s will may not be carried out.

Inclusion of Charlie’s son Sean quitting his job in corporate law in Houston and coming to Athena to live until he figures out what he wants to do with his life helps to make the characters more believable. There’s little direct characterization: “I had barely known the man [James Delacorte], but his death upet me more than I realized earlier. Others, particularly his family, might have had legitimate grudges against him--or not--but to me he had been unfailingly courteous. The thought that he had been poisoned made me angry. If that proved to be the case, I would do my best to aid Kanesha in rooting out the killer. I felt a bit like Nemesis, I suppose. That reminded me of Miss Marple and the novel in which an elderly millionaire hired her to serve as Nemesis and avenge an old crime. I wouldn’t put myself in Miss Marple’s league, but she was certainly a fine role model.” (143)

Despite the setting in Athena, Mississippi, there’s little sense of actually being in the South, other than a very few specific references: “I really couldn’t see myself referring to him as anything other than ‘Mr. Pendergrast’ because of my Southern programming. Like generations of my forebears, I’d been reared to address my elders with respect. I had a hard time using an elder’s given name in a casual fashion and still used ‘sir’ and ‘ma’am’ when addressing them.” (153) It’s never clear exactly whereabouts Athena is located in Mississippi, and there are only a few physical details of the town.

CLASSIFIED AS MURDER is okay, but it’s nothing especially memorable. (C)
 
“The Ring” is one of Dell Shannon’s Luis Mendoza short stories included in her collection MURDER BY THE TALE published in 1987. Lt. Mendoza is head of the Homicide Squad for the LAPD.

When Mendoza walks in on a jewelry robbery at Shanrahan and MacReady’s, he finds Shanrahan tied up and the robber’s accomplice dead on the floor. The robber escapes, along with only the jewelry belonging to Hollywood starlet Marvena Rayle; she’d left her jewelry in storage until she moved into a new home with a built-in safe. Despite her engagement to millionaire Thomas Wentworth Horley III, the jewelry is very ordinary, multiple items worth perhaps $10,000 total. Why does someone want it enough to stage a daylight robber, kill his accomplice, and then return the jewelry to Marvena Rayle the next day?

The plot of “The Ring” isn’t very believable in terms of time span and motivation. It does, however, contain a neat observation of one of Mendoza’s quirks: “These people [Hollywood]. An oversized pool it was, with several females sitting about it artistically in the all-but-nude, and several mades self-consciously displaying muscles and suntan on a diving board. Mendoza surveyed hem disapprovingly. As an agnostic and something of a connoisseur of females, he felt no moral disapproval; only a social one. He was sufficiently old fashioned to believe that nudity should be reserved for bedrooms and doctor’s offices.” (48) (B)
 
“Accident” is one of the short stories in Dell Shannon’s 1987 collection MURDER BY THE TALE. It features Lt. Luis Mendoza of the LAPD.

Smith, from Traffic, forwards a report on an accident that doesn’t seem right to Homicide so that Luis Mendoza can his famous intuition. It seems straightforward--a moving truck slipped its brakes, rolled downhill gathering speed, and crashed into the Reyes home, killing ten-year-old Carlotta Reyes, who was at home recuperating from measles. There were no witnesses. Fred Hansen, the driver, swears he left the brakes properly set and the wheels turned in to the curb; he has a sixteen-year clean driving record with his company, no accidents. It’s almost certainly the work of a kid, but nearby schools’ absentees are all accounted for. Then, three days later, Mendoza sees a brief newspaper report that Emilia Gonzales, Carlotta’s best friend, has been killed in a hit-and-run accident that produced only head injuries. He takes Emilia’s death as proof Carlotta was killed, and he soon turns up both motive and murderer.

Interesting example of making connections from seemingly unrelated events. (A-)
 
DEAD ON THE VINE is the first book in J M. Harvey’s Violet Vineyard Murder Mystery series. It was published in e-book format in 2014.

Claire du Montague owns Violet Vineyard in Napa Valley, California, near the town of St. Helena. When her vineyard foreman Victor Gonzalez finds neighbor Kevin Harlon beaten to death in her rows of grapevines, she’s naturally upset because they’d been good friends. She’d grieved with him through the abduction and murder of his young daughter Winter the previous year. Who wanted him dead? And does it have anything to do with his obsession that the little girl identified as Winter was actually Jenna Valdez, that the man who’d confessed to killing ‘the little blond girl’ meant Jenna and not Winter? But if so, what happened to Winter? Claire’s been friends with Sheriff Ben Stoltze since high school, but he’s retiring after this term, and he’s been sidelined on the murder case. Laurel Harlon, Kevin’s widow, is Claire’s major suspect, especially when Laurel turns over letters from Claire’s daughter Jessica, written to Kevin but not mailed and kept in the gym bag that was stolen from Jessica’s car. Jessica’s arrested, but deputy Doug Priest, who’s in charge of the case, is sleeping with Laurel. What is going on?

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Harvey attempts to direct attention away from Harlon’s killer and the motive for Harlon’s death, but the omissions in standard police procedure make clear that something is rotten in the Sheriff’s Department. When Harlon cannot identify the child’s decomposed remains as his daughter’s, why wasn’t DNA testing done? Shouldn’t any disturbed earth in the area of Harlon’s and Claire’s home be examined in the search for Winter Harlon? A tree had recently been planted. The lead detective on Winter’s disappearance is removed from the case and forced to resign from the force, based on allegations of sexual harassment by Laurel Harlon. Laurel is pegged as involved from the beginning, and the identity of her accomplice is meant to be a surprise. I’m sorry, but it isn’t.

As often happens in first novels in a series, more characters are introduced than are necessary to the plot. Some of them are standard: the wise old mentor Samson, who knows all about making fine wine; faithful henchman Victor, who works hard and long; daughter with secrets Jessica; gossipy neighbors; good, bad, and indifferent law people. Claire du Montagne has potential, but she’s presented as too stubborn and independent for her own good; the amount of physical punishment she absorbs from Laurel is more cartoon-like than realistic.

Sense of place is by far the strongest element in DEAD ON THE VINE. “Bishop Lynch Daycare was built as a convent in the twenties, but by the time I was a teenager it had been converted into a youth center. I had many fond memories of dance socials and basketball games held within its faded stucco walls. The bathrooms were ancient, the gym floor creaked and sagged under your feet and the halls smelled of chalk dust. In the eighties the building had been renovated by the diocese and rededicated as Bishop Lynch Daycare. The center’s main clientele were the children of the working poor who paid a fee based on income. The renovations had been sensitive to the Spanish architecture and the whitewashed porticoes and breezeways remained, along with the ancient oaks that shaded the balding grass of the playground.” (118)

DEAD ON THE VINE is strong enough that I’ll try the next in the series. (B)
 
BOUGHT AND DIED FOR is the second in Annis Ward Jackson’s Ellis Crawford series. It was published in e-book format in 2014.

Ellis Crawford is Chief of Police in Battenburg, North Carolina, in Dawson County, in the eastern part of the state. Retired from a career as an MP in the Marine Corps after being gravely wounded in an explosion in Beirut, he’d planned to take the Battenburg job long enough to get civilian experience before moving on to a larger town and larger pay. But he’s uncovered a serial killer and has become fond of Lacy Sutton, niece of his officer/dispatcher Ruby Lea Sutton, and the town. When he and Assistant Chief Lynwood Spruill discover the bodies of Megan Wilder and Adrian Forbes, they’ve been staged to look as if he’d stabbed her to death, then slipped and hit his head on the hearth, dying of the blow. Except Crawford spots some anomalies, and the autopsy confirms Forbes had been killed by a rounded object, like a rolling pin or a baseball bat. His family confirms that Forbes had been in love with Megan Wilder. She’d previously been involved with Roger Cates, who has a history of assaults on women, including Megan. Cates’s truck had beens seen near her house the morning of the murders. Did he take his possessiveness too far? Megan also has a sugar daddy who’s provided an upscale house, BMW, and plenty of spending money. As Crawford investigates Megan’s background, Mayor Jarvis Williams is keeping close tabs on the investigation at the insistence of the city council. Why?

I was a bit disappointed in BOUGHT AND DIED FOR. Characters are less well developed than in the first book, though Jackson is creating a police department of individuals whose strengths are complementary. She includes enough of Ellis Crawford’s personal life and emotional baggage to be authentic, and she’s made him believably dynamic as he adjusts to his new life. Limited third person narration through Ellis’s eyes is well-handled.

The plot contains suitable foreshadowing of the killer’s identity, and the conclusion is satisfying.

Sense of place is good: “Crawford stopped for lunch at a small country restaurant by a crossroad. Their sign said Homemade Chicken and Dumplings. Just as he had learned the difference in eastern and western North Carolina barbeque, so had he learned that down east chicken and dumplings were not like the mountain dish, large round puffy dumplings, but thick strips of pastry cooked in chicken broth until tender and slippery.” (57)

BOUGHT AND DIED FOR keeps me interested in following this series. (B)
 
Barbara Fradkin’s ONCE UPON A TIME is the second book in her Inspector Michael Green mystery series set in Ottawa. It was published in e-book format in 2002.

When Eugene Walker, an elderly man in poor health, is found dead of hypothermia in the parking lot of an Ottawa hospital, his death is ruled as natural causes. Eager to escape paperwork, Inspector Green of the Major Crimes Squad, checks it out and thinks Walker had been struck in the head and left to die. Suffering from severe physical and psychological trauma as a survivor of the Nazis in World War II, unable to remember anything of his life before the war, he had been sent to a convalescent hospital in England where he met and married an English woman; he adopted her surname, and they’d immigrated to Canada. There he’d lived an isolated, unhappy life. As Green investigates Walker’s death, he gets unexpected reactions from the family and opens up questions of Walker’s exact role in the war. Was he a Jewish survivor of the death camps? A Polish youth sent to the labor camps? A Nazi collaborator? A Nazi officer? The more Green digs, the more complex the case becomes, and the more understanding he gains of his parents, both of whom were Holocaust survivors.

Michael Green is realistic, not the least because of his self-knowledge: “Delegating grunt work was one of the rare perks of being an inspector. Green hated the committees, the statistics and the memos, but he loved being able to issue orders and have the plodding minutiae of a case fall into place. Making sense of those minutiae, interviewing witnesses and pulling it all together--those were things he hated to delegate, even when he should.” (134) There’s enough of his family life, especially his relationship with his father Sid, to make him believable. Fradkin has given him police colleagues who form an authentic community working together for common purpose. She uses limited third person point of view through Green effectively.

The plot is very much one step forward, two steps back, as Green’s theories of the crime change with each new revelation. The identity of the killer is a well-done surprise, a satisfactory one because Green tempers justice with mercy. Sense of place is good.

ONCE UPON A TIME is well-written. (A-)
 
“The Motive” is one of Dell Shannon’s Luis Mendoza short stories in her anthology MURDER BY THE TALE published in 1987.

Eddie Blake is the boy who had everything--a senior at an exclusive private high school, generous well-to-do parents, superior intelligence, friends, girlfriends. So who shot him in his car outside the public library on a busy school night with no one hearing the shots? There’s no problem with gangs or drugs at his school, his friends can’t understand why someone shot him. So Sgt. Art Hackett asks his boss Lt. Luis Mendoza of the LAPD Homicide Squad to take a look. Mendoza does so and picks up a few impressions. Ursula Marble, whose father forced her to break up with Eddie because he had been Protestant and she Catholic, isn’t as innocent as she appears to her parents. Eddie’s younger sister Anne points out to him that Eddie and Ursula had only pretended to break up and that Eddie had more money than he could account for from his allowance. But where was he getting it, and what does it say about his murder?

Once again, though his knowledge of human nature and his incessant need to have things neat and orderly, including crimes, Mendoza comes through. (B)
 
A SIEGE OF BITTERNS is the first book in Steve Burrows’s Birder Murder mystery series. It was published in free or inexpensive e-book format in 2014.

Detective Chief Inspector Domenic Jejeune of the Saltmarsh, North Norfolk Constabulary, is an incomer personally selected by Detective Chief Superintendent Colleen Shepherd for his talent, almost genius, at detection and the celebrity of his rescue of the Home Secretary’s daughter. The local CID, especially Detective Sergeant Danny Malk and Detective Constable Tony Holland, don’t know what to make of him, and their doubts only grow when local environmentalist / TV persoanlity Cameron Brae is found hanging from a tree, a hood over his head and chains on wrists and ankles. Baer had been an enthusiastic birder, competing to be the first to complete a county list of 400 bird species for Norfolk; his diary contains a notation days before his death of am bittern, which Jejeune (also a birder) interprets as American Bittern, a visitor seldom seen in Norfolk, He concludes that Brae’s death has to do with the contest. As he and the team investigate further, Jejeune realizes that Brae had been concerned with expansion of a wind farm that would impact marsh areas, and he comes to the conclusion that Brae had identified contaminants that were poisoning the marshes. He’s satisfied himself that Peter Largemount, developer of the wind farm, killed Brae, when someone blows Largemount away with a shotgun. If Largemont killed Brae, who killed Largemount? Back to square one, under increasing pressure from Chief Superintendent Shepherd and local MP Beverly Brennan for a quick, neat arrest.

I will definitely be reading more of Burrow’s Birder series, though one needs to be fluent in bird watching terminology and have some understanding of bird behavior to pick up on the clues to the solution of the cases. Cutting the book by fifty pages and reducing the “one step forward, two steps back” format would help. The identity of the polluter seems far-fetched.

Characters in A SIEGE OF BITTERNS are well done. I’m not sure, however, if DCI Jejeune is properly the protagonist; Sergeant Malk is a more sympathetic character in many ways. Jejeune still isn’t sure what he wants to be when he grows up. “...he envied Lindy, doing a job she genuinely cared about. Could he have ever gotten so passionate about his own work? His curse, if he cared to think about it that way, was that people considered him to have talents, a gift, even, for a job he neither liked nor particularly wanted to do. But when those talents were in the area of policing, well, he could fully understand how everybody from his parents back in Canada to his superiors would be urging him to follow his talents as far as they would take him. He had heard all the arguments, and he had long since stopped offering counters to them. Now he just did his work, as quietly and efficiently as possible, and said nothing.” (64) “ ‘So is this the part where you tell me you don’t want to do it any more?’ [Lindy] said quietly. It was. But do what, exactly. Be a media celebrity, a boy wonder, the Great White Hope of the police force? Or be a policeman, a detective, at all? What he did want, he didn’t really know. He just knew it wasn’t this, dwelling in the darkness of other people’s psyches, sifting through the layers of deception, uncovering their lies, their duplicity, their crimes.” (196-7) Jejeune is presumably quite young for his rank, but the constant self-doubt sounds more like a mid-life crisis than the thought patterns of a successful younger man. I can’t help wonder if Burrows intended the comparison of DCI Jejeune’s name to the adjective “jejune.” Other characters are well developed.

Burrows accurately captures the atmosphere that greets the incomer Jejeune: “If Malk could have put a name to the mood, he would have gone for curiosity rather than anticipation. He was already aware of one or two rumblngs from those who had seen Jejeune in action at the crime scene. Now they were wondering if that performance was a one-off. Malk doubted that anyone had gone so far as to make up their mind about him just yet, but anybody who came to Saltmarsh with this kind of fanfare wasn’t going to get the benefit of the doubt for long. Reputation didn’t count for much in this part of the world. They were going to want to see some proof that the DCS’s star recruit was worth the blaze of publicity that had accompanied his appointment.” (35)

Setting is all important in A SIEGE OF BITTERNS, opening as it does: “At its widest point, the marsh stretched almost a quarter of a mile across the north Norfolk coastline. Here the river that had flowed lie a silver ribbon through the rolling farmlands to the west finally came to rest, spilling its contents across the flat terrain, smoothing out the uneven contours, seeping silently into every corner. From this point on, tiny rivulets, no wider than a man’s stride, would trace their way between the dunes and shale banks to complete the river’s final journey out to sea. At the margin of land and water, the marsh belongs to neither, and it carried the disquieting wildness of all forsaken things. Onshore winds rattled the dry reeds like hollow bones. The peaty tang of decaying vegetation and wet earth hung in the air. An hour earlier, the watery surface of the wetland had shimmered like polished copper; a fluid mirror for the last rays of the setting sun. But now, the gathering gloom had transformed the marsh into a dark, featureless emptiness.” (9)

A SEIGE OF BITTERNS (A-)
 
“The Long Chance” is a Lt. Luis Mendoza short story in Dell Shannon’s 1987 anthology MURDER BY THE TALE.

LAPD Homicide has worked murders of five middle-aged to elderly women--Agnes Hope, Ruth Fleming, Marian Steers, Evelyn Gibbs, Polly Winters--and arrested Edgar Edward Fleming, nephew of Ruth Fleming, for their deaths. He’s confessed that he killed the women because his protective voices told him they were his secret enemies. He’d also been able to kill an army of invading Martians, thanks to the voices’ warning, and is expecting the imminent arrival of the Anti-Christ. Luis Mendoza, however, isn’t convinced that Polly Winters, the third murder victim, belongs in the sequence. The MO of the murder was different, she had no connection with any of the other women, and she didn’t live in the same area as the other four. A retired teacher, she had been a level-headed, financially conservative woman, survived only by her niece Marjorie Gaines. Miss Gaines expects to inherit her aunt’s duplex and some stocks, so nice since she’s engaged to be married. She’s got an alibi for her aunt’s time of death. Who would an elderly woman, living alone, admit to her house between 10 PM and 1 AM? Certainly not Edgar Fleming, whom she’d never met. Who, then?

It takes a chance remark from Mendoza’s grandmother, who wants him safely married, about the responsibility of elders in the matter of their young relatives’ marriages to put him on the right track. Very well done story. (A)
 
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