Recent content by AaronShaw

Hi sirmyk. Thanks for the nice comments :). It's certainly not superb writing, but I hope it gets the job done. Anyway, I went out and shot part of the script. Some random screen caps are below (including effects shots, terrain enhancement etc): [Note the particularily bad greenscreen...

Mmm yes, very true. For this piece I feel that minimal dialogue is the best way to go. Actions speak louder than words in some instances (not all). Thanks for the help!

Thanks for the explanation :). Very well put! I also just dug up the thread you were talking about. Seems to have some interesting stuff! I'll have to read through it when I get a chance to sit down and really ponder. Yes! There we have it! I felt that something was missing and I...

True, it might indeed end up running shorter than 1min per page. When breaking it down into a rough storyboard though there seemed to be plenty to do (there are a lot more setups and camera angles, as storyboarded now, than actual text on the page). I don't mind lengthening it at all. I just...

Yeah basically it's just a short exercise. It's actually meant to be entered into a short film contest and has to be under the five minute mark. Usually, a page takes a minute or so of actual on screen time so I'm sitting about the right place I think. Yeah that's pretty much correct. No...

Hi, I've been a registered user and luker for some time now. I have posted a few times though! Anyway, I just completed a short film script entitled "Verity." I'm hoping this is the right place for this post! I could use some suggestions for improvement. I also need to work in the...

Anyone? ;) To the Mods: My apologies for posting in the wrong forum. I wasn't sure where to put this so I took a wild guess!

Greetings everyone :) I'm new here but I figured it wouldn't hurt to get myself involved with things. I currently have two different screenplay ideas I have been pondering for some time. I'm curious if anyone would be interested in co-writing one (or both) with me. General Idea: 1)...

New here but if I may add to the wonderful controversy (start of on a good note eh?): Indeed so very true. Indeed quite unnatural. I must qualify what I am about to say by mentioning that I am an aspiring linguist so many of my thoughts are quite biased (and in a community such as...

Thanks for the warm welcome :)

Hey everyone, New here and thought I would drop in and say a few words about myself. I've always enjoyed writing. It's an amazing outlet for stress and emotion. I haven't written anything for a while now and I am about to start work on a screenplay so I figured I'd find some places to aid...