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favorite smells: coffe in the moring, frutty smells, peppermint, and lavender I dislike the smell of vomit. I think that vomit smells worse than poop.

I want to know more. It is very well writen. I don't know how you writers do it. . . I wish I had such capabilities: to paint a picture with words.

How about this one? Great read

This is what I do. The first thing that draws me to an unknown book with an unknown author is the cover. At his point I am hoping that the cover reveals something about the book. Sometimes the mere color will draw me (yes I am that fickle). After the cover has sucked me in, I go to the...

Start writing. It will take shape.

Think of it this way. When deep in thought (your own personal narrative, your self talk), how often do you say "I"? Maybe I am not clear. When describing the charcters stream of conciousness you should focus on the images, sounds, experiences of the character. It is your voice. How does...

I want to know more. :) What kind of relationship do they have at the beginning? Is this a romantic work? If it is why is he curious rather than afraid or very interested. What is his real motivation for looking for the girl? What is the girls motivation for stalking the man? Does the boy...

I second that opinion. Look at your flow on the second paragraph first few lines. It flows very nicely until you get to the rhyme. See if you can flow into the rhyme without effort. Your them is very interesting. I can relate to the lines. Keep writing.

I see that you love horses. I love animals too. I have a dog an three cats. Horses have such kind eyes. Is that silly?

I wrote a little about Soul on my blog. Just for you!

Hello, Nice to meet you. :)

I don't like it when people get too close when I am eating. I feel like they are breathing on my food. phones going off when I am trying to read or study. Cellphones going off during lectures, and people who have the audacity to answer the phone during the lecture. Step out if it's an...

What is your favorite book cover ever? Where you disappointed with the read? I picked up the Witch of Colgne by Tobsha because of the beutiful cover (I admit it). Have you done that? Please confess.

Not surprised that Dune was on the top of the list. I wish more people would read Dune. It one of my fevorite books ever.

This will sound werd as a suggestion, but Jacquelin Carey's firs book Kushiel's Dart is close in style. Dark. a bit seductive (not a bit). No Faries, but you may enjoy it. I read the Hamilton and Carey at the same time for a while. I found them so very similar in style.