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LOL! My second review has come in for The Untold Story of Pyramus and Thisbe. This time, instead of another FIVE STAR REVIEW, this reader gives me TWO stars. What about you? Right now this play is FREE. Amazon.com: KZ's review of The Untold Story Of Pyramus And Thisbe

This play is FREE today, 12/18. Just letting you know, in case you or anyone you know may be interested. If you don't have a Kindle, you can still read it through the free reading app for PC, phones, tablet, etc. On the page you'll see on the right side info about how to get the app. It's...

One of my plays I'm offering for FREE today (11/28) and FREE tomorrow (11/29) to anyone. :) The Untold Story of Pyramus and Thisbe I'm shouting to hear the echoes here people - to see if you can find any value in this play of mine, too - and say so back to me. You don't have to write a...

Thank you so much! If I have any, I'll let you know.

Thanks! This is the one that won: 25. No one on my side. I'm caught in-between two sides. I must stand my ground. Copyright ©2013 Steven L. Sheppard All Rights Reserved Martin Eichinger, "Bringing Down the House" "Bringing Down the House," Martin Eichinger; Quent Cordair Fine Art Hey...

I'm a winner! See my "victory speech" on my FB wall. :)

Thank you ever so much for bringing it to my attention. And my spelling error with "divine". Small changes = big difference. I sincerely thank you.

I've changed it to that. I think the meaning is clearer, all tenses are in the present. What do you think?

I could try: for she is in love.

I economized, compressed it, and used the pic. to have the reader put it all together. But what you are saying, I do understand. I may not have the effect I wanted to achieve precisely, I won't rule that out, but I still like it as is and it will stay as is. I will however consider this one...

Ends November 5th! That's very soon. Please everyone consider visiting the site and "liking" what you like of my written entries there!!!! I do see what you are saying about the use of "been". It definitely comes off as her seemingly being in a past relationship, or something of the like...

The title of the sculpture is Into the Depths. Looks like they are underwater to me. I ran with it. I am short on time, library is closing, talk later. :)

Spelling error, corrected. Thank you so much! :) That's why I am calling the book Five Seven Five, and not Haikus or something. My structure is the 5-7-5 and doing anything I want to within that framework. In regards to that last one, instead of them being in "water" think of them...

Thanks! Here is another fine example, one that is, I think, the most liked one of mine right now. If any of you like these PLEASE simply go to the link in my first post to "like" it on the Facebook contest page. 23. He's falling in love. She's eager to receive him, for she is in love...

Here is just one of many many ones of mine there. Contest still going on until November 5th. 42. On my face, sunshine. In my glass, great tasting wine. Day off work: divine! Copyright ©2013 Steven L. Sheppard All Rights Reserved Damon-A. H. Denys, "Life's Small Pleasures"...