Recent content by Nightshade

re: NM, I found a topic sugesting some

Anyone recommend and good publishers. Somewhere that isnt like seriously complicated, where you have to interview and whatver. My parents would freak if a publisher just happened to show up at our house. lol. Some places where you submit your work first, and if you get passed approval or...

re: Ooh, he wrote What Dreams May Come, which was one screwed up movie(in a good way, of course)

re: Nope, but I may have to look into it

re: The story isnt changing at all, really. This is just me starting out with the vamp point of view. In my previous version, they flashed back to her past. I like this way better, sicne it's not so rushed and a bit more descriptive. The other beginning wasnt as much as an attention getter...

I've just writtten a brand new begiinning to my vamp story. Dont worry, it's short.... Eternal Night Chapter 1 – Undead I lay sleeping in the dark closet like an unwanted dog. For that was all I was to them. Memories of my birth are unnaturally clear, as if they were lived just...

re: Chapter 2 - Undead We were open all day and night, though there was little difference between them. But this was the time the most customers came in to the “Pyre”. I sat upon a stool, leaning back against the bar as they streamed in. In no time, the club was a sea of pale skinned...

Heres the first two chapters to a story I'm working on. These two pretty much explain the pattern thats going to be through the whole thing. **************************************** Chapter 1 – Mortal The streets were empty, besides a car or two, each passing by in a rush. This was our...

re: There arent many main chracters besides the two I'm using as narrators. Using this method there oviously cant be too much mystery about their pasts, so I just tell it straight out. So far i havent really repeated myself in the seperate characters. They're very very different so that hard to...

re: Maybe. But the night way causes suspense for the humans, since its a risk to go outside at all. I've just started on the fourth chapter. It's kinda short. I hope it gets past short story

re: i like it. But i think it goes a little too fast in some places. Taking it slower can add some suspense. But besides that, its interesting and has good detail.

I'm working on a new story, hopefully a bit shorter than the others I was working on. It takes place in sorta modern time, but it's always night. The book takes place in two different point of views, switching back and forth between each chapter. It switches from mortal(human) to...

re: coolness. thanx

awesomest book ever. Any know of a site for it? or if its gonna become a series? no book ends with "we will meet again" and doesnt become a series