a paragraph from a short story i'm writing :
....."Nourhan !!!! Get a hold of yourself! We have to keep moving!" a man yelled to me. I looked below and I saw huge rocks coated with the water of the sea ...I realized ...I was halfway climbing up a mountain!
I felt like two elephants were where my shoulders should be and tears were rushing down my cheeks. I can still hear the man yelling but I had no control over myself, paralyzed by the fear of falling. How did I get here?!?!?!
....."Nourhan !!!! Get a hold of yourself! We have to keep moving!" a man yelled to me. I looked below and I saw huge rocks coated with the water of the sea ...I realized ...I was halfway climbing up a mountain!
I felt like two elephants were where my shoulders should be and tears were rushing down my cheeks. I can still hear the man yelling but I had no control over myself, paralyzed by the fear of falling. How did I get here?!?!?!