Recent content by Peter Jordan

Hi Occlith Thanks for your comments. The quote that the creatures saw his different skin was from the main character's point of view and the main character did not know that the creatures were blind. Your guess why the main character has access to such a powerful device is probably as...

Hi SFG75 No I have not, but I will keep them in mind when I'm next in the bookstore. Thanks Peter

Hi John Thank you for your comments, they are appreciated. Thank you for your sentence critique. My grammar has improved immensely since 1992 enabling me to finally get a book published. I will take on your suggestion about the rewrite. I guess I have been a bit against this as it was...

Hi All Keen to read your thoughts on this stroy of mine I wrote for a course I attended in Wellington 1992. Only the Only The solid crystal of the chair bit into his back as he lifted the cup away from his saucer, towards his lips. He looked around, they were all around him, talking...

It can be a messy process, but do not worry I will pay for any rug cleaning required. Thanks for the welcome Peter

Thanks for the welcome Peter

As it is not available on Google Books even as a preview I can't comment on the content. So I need to ask you a question, is it word for word or majorly plot for plot, or is it just the general idea? Ideas are not copyrightable, if they were all modern day authors would be charged with...

Hi No so much an avid reader, but a person who loves to read what it is that makes a good book. I am a new Author and I have many more books waiting to be completed on my computer and more still in my mind and I need information on what makes a person pick up a book and go WOW! So...