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As a guy whose heart has been broken way too many times, I started writing poetry as a kind of release. This will be the first public showing of any of them. To Hold You. I’d love to hold you one last time Before this body dies To touch your hair To see you smile To look into your eyes If I...

Mozarts 40th Symphony Aural sex thenib

Good point angerball...I knew that! thenib

OK, let me try and explain this a little better. Suppose one was to submit something and get a lengthy critique. How does one then change the submission to reflect any changes suggested in the critique. This would then enable a fresh critique to follow, without the, 'er...yeah what she said'...

Sirmyk, Does this read any better? “Open the window so’s we can get out of ‘ere then give me a hand.” Saul quickly opened the window and went back to help his brother. Between them, they managed to get Stanley to the top of the stairs and tossed his lifeless body down to the bottom...

I know you can only edit a post for up to 15 mins after posting, but, how do we change things in response to feedback. :confused: thenib

Prologue Friday 10-April-1903 The flickering candle sent animated shadows scurrying around the walls of the small cellar. Trying to ignore the dreadful smell of stale beer and liquor, Professor Stanley Patterson placed the large book on the stand on the table and took a step back. Ever the...

Reading I'll read most things, the exceptions being chick-lit and fantasy.

First day, hoping it's going to be the first of many. thenib