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I recommend Run, by Douglas E. Winter.

I wonder if he'd be interested in some three-way sects. Some kind of trinity fling. Can you ask him?

Tell Jesus I said Hi. And ask him why my cat Mittens died. Yeah, I pinned her to a cross and stabbed her side, but I thought with the nine lives and all that she'd ask Papa Cat upstairs to forgive me and resurrect her body.

Most of my groceries consist of organic products.

THE BOOK OF BEITZ... (continued) 23:01 And thus the lord sayeth to picketh up the wood of Samuel and to hold it well. 23:02 For he who knows this man shall come forth with many doves of white. 23:03 So he sayeth, Beat thyself on thine forehead until thou hath been struck dumb. 23:04...

Sorta to the left.

I was there. I just couldn't pull myself together long enough to knock on the door, so I left, with my head bowed in shame.

Hey, Novella. Just wanted to say "hey".

Yeah, my life's a little complicated right now. I should visit more often. And maybe share some of my poems.

Bye.............

Her knee and his face were properly introduced. Hmm...

I would ask Death if I could have his job for the day.

The second stanza has a line that reads funny: "called her by her", and "name" and "bay" don't seem to ryhme. In the third stanza you used "bright" as a verb, but other than that I liked the poem. Some of the rhyming does seem a bit forced, yet it works.

As a side note: The first and second line are in past tense, the third and fourth present tense, and the fith past tense. I'm not sure if you meant to do this, but it reads a little strange. As for a title: Something about rebirth, or a clensing perhaps. Maybe "Fallen"?

"Technology of the eyes"... what does that even mean? Optometry?

Just don't stand on your hands and knees. I heard that's quite difficult.

I would love it if you'd send me the first ten pages or so via e-mail. If it raises at least one of my eyebrows, I will happily purchase a copy from the source you mentioned. My e-mail address is author@palindromehannah.com, if that offer also applies to me.

What happens, when it becomes too painful to bear over something real and imagined?

Wolf Larsen... Stewart, sometimes you crack me up. That made my entire evening. :cool: Reading this entire thread, including the poem, is quite strenuous. And funny.

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