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This is a copy of the first one. Which is better? The television flickered on and off from across the room. While it flickered on, it provided a subtle light through the darkness. The small room and its tepid, humid temperature made it difficult to breath. When the soft light of the old black...

Thanks for the help Very helpful information. I actually cut the opening scence down because last time I wrote it I wrote to much. I made it seem like the person who died was actually the primary character. So I cut it down leaving the readers to think about what happens next. Left questions...

My book is Mystery/thriller...thanks again

Thanks for your input Nice to have some positive reviews at times. Thanks!

Is it that bad? Someone please tell me what you think. Thanks!

Moderator Please delete this thread before someone has an acute MI. Please. Please. Please.!!! Thanks

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Delete the damn thread then Just delete it then if it bothers you so much. I don't see what the big deal is. I'll just go somewhere else. Thanks

I have been thinking that by self publishing I could maybe get my name out to other publishers and hopefully get picked up. Has anyone ever heard any bad things about lulu.com?

I have been thinking since finishing up with my novel that I would possibly self publish. Please weight the pro's and con's for me. I am still intrested in traditional publishing, but self publishing at www.lulu.com seems easy and free. Any advice recommended. Thanks in advance. Justin

Here is my re-written prolouge. *************************** The night was dark and dreary. Not a single star in the sky. No moonlight to guide his path. The killer, dressed in his black hooded robe, made his way down the streets of the oaks. The Oaks was a quiet residential neighborhood...

Thanks Thanks for the sound advice. I made the changes you suggested and it work out nicely. Thanks again

Nice Clean, simple, full of meaning. To sum it up NICE!!

This is my first attempt at a mystery novel. Let me know what you think. Thanks: ************************************* PROLOUGE Ville Platte, Louisiana Outside he could hear the howl of violent wind and the fierce roar of the thunder. The night sky was brought to light by extreme...

Thanks Thanks Nathan for your advice. I would love to hear what you think about pruning my story. Just let me know I can send you over a copy of what I have so far. THanks again for the advice!

Leaving me hanging Nice. I need more. LOL. Your leaving me hanging! You do very well with descriptive details. Thats what I need to learn from you! HA! I'm dull and plain in my story. Thanks for the inspiration.

Response While the mother's death is not a murder it ties in with the murders later on in the other chapters. The story is about a ring of sexual deviants that pass on HIV to others who are willing to get it for the sake of having sex with no protection and with numerous partners. Eric's father...

Spectacular Very nice work. I'm impressed coming from a 22 year old. LOL.