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Letter To God by Box Car Racer is what I am listening to right now.

I sort of read, and I listen to a lot of music, well thanks for the advice.

It's so hard to know when to make new paragraphs, like this sentence, when should I start the new paragraph: His eyes lit red has he looked and Jane's face, "I know you gotta go, but just don't leave tomorrow," he said with a smile on his face. Jane hugged him, and then left for the airport...

I thought that too, I don't know, maybe I'll do that. Thanks for your help.

Is this good? I shortened it to 2 pages, but I just couldn't make it any shorter, I guess I'll have to let my teacher take a couple of points off. Josh was a thirteen year old boy with blue eyes, a nice smile, and was very tan. His girlfriend was about the same, except she had a secret she...

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Here is my story: Josh was a thirteen year old boy with blue eyes, a nice smile, and was very tan. His girlfriend was about the same, except she had a secret she never told him. They both were at a restaurant talking about Josh’s band. “We’re going to perform for the school on Monday,”...

to see that he

George killed Tom.

This was for school, but I liked the idea, so I decided to make a longer version, this is the short version, I'll make the longer one later: Josh was a thirteen year old boy with blue eyes, a nice smile, and was very tan. His girlfriend was about the same, except she had a secret she never...

Thanks, here's where you can read the second one: http://forums.thebookforum.com/showthread.php?t=7933

Is it a book for kids? I hate books with big words in it.

and very stupid and

Yay! 18th Post! that she was hot

that was really, really

that was so tasty

Spider Man is my favorite, but I don't have any other favorites. I don't really like comics.

Was a knife and

I was talking about Afganstan Oh, and I finished the second one, it's a little bit longer, and tell me which one you like better if you choose to read the second one.

The next day: Josh woke up from his sleep. He looked in the rooms to find everyone else was sleeping. He went downstairs and saw it was only 5:34. He decided to have some cereal. He watched television as he ate the cereal. Josh heard foot steps a couple of seconds later and was scared. It turned...