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So far I've made the little changes that you have suggested I should improve :) I've also been thinking about what im writing :) Thanks!!! If you have any more criticism I shall accept it enthusiastically :)

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What do you think guys? -How was last night David? - Helen asked grinning as she saw him coming through the door. - It was fine - David replied in a sharp and bitter tone - Don't you have anything else to share with me? - She asked once again trying to spice up the conversation but even then...

I know I posted this link several times but it's just the frustration of trying to get people to read it! Sorry! And thank you for the extract advice! ''Just as David got home his mobile rang, it was Elizabeth. - Are we still up for tonight? - the innocent voice on the phone asked - Of...

Hell guys! I have decided on writing a book and so far I have written a bit of it but I'm not sure whether it is worth writing more of it. Please visit this link deadlycupid.webs.com and send some some feedback to the e-mail address given in the 'Contact us' section. I WOULD BE SO GRATEFUL FOR...