David Frame
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Just finished writing my first book and looking for an agent - it's a spy novel set in Belfast centred around an MI6 agent named Solomon Fuller. Here's the first one of fifty or so chapters. I hope you enjoy it. Let me know if anybody would like to see more chapters.
Please do comment and criticise - all help welcomed and greatly appreciated.
1
Mickey gulped the last of his pint whilst waiting for the long overdue arrival of his Commanding Operations Officer. Stuart Cullen was at least three pints late, forcing Mickey to grease the gears with a few more than he’d originally planned, but what the hell, he knew what he was doing. Never to be accused of being a snappy dresser, he wore black drainpipes, a blood coloured short-sleeved shirt and ash black, soft leather shoes. A black duffle coat lay on the floor beside him, doubling as a blanket for somebody else’s dog. He’d been filling his time trying to ram his little finger at speed through a beer mat. He stunk of Fahrenheit.
He pulled a thumb of soft tobacco from his battered leather pouch and without thought licked a rolly together in less than ten seconds. He slid from his stool and wandered towards the double doors that spilled outwards from the bar and onto the grey slab stone pavement. Striking a match with his right hand whilst shielding the flame with his left, Mickey lit his cigarette as he stared out into the darkness of the Falls Road, eyes scanning for a mixture of Cullen, Loyalists and the British Army. It was highly unlikely that the latter two would be seen on the road given the current climate of peace, but old habits diehard when a quick glance could make the difference between waking up the next day and, well, not.
The road was wet even though the rain had stopped almost an hour before. It was a little after five in the evening, but the sun had all but disappeared at about the same time as its archrival the rain. The orange glow of the streetlights skipped and shimmered along the water filled potholes and dips of the Falls. Mickey shook his head at the image and let out an almost nihilistic laugh. Here he was, stood outside The Liberty Public House in the heart of Catholic west Belfast, in the shadow of Black Mountain in the stronghold of the Provo’s, and the street was covered in an orange glow; just think of the irony. Fucking British Government probably installed the orange bulbs deliberately, having a good laugh at us dumb micks from their cushy little offices in Whitehall.
A man in his late sixties slowly pumped his legs as he pedalled past the recently modernised swimming baths that sat directly across the road, proudly displaying its new covered slide that looped outside for a few thrilling metres before darting back indoors. The rusty pushbike looked to be at least thirty years old, with the old man finishing off the nostalgic look with a pair of shiny bicycle clips and a thick woollen scarf. A rough cloth satchel swung from side to side across his back as the pensioner pedalled, his heavy-duty boiler suit and weatherproofs chafing loudly as he slowly moved forward in short, strained bursts. His hand kept slicking back the last of his grey hair as it was blown in all directions by the still damp wind; every time he did so the bike wobbled precariously as he took one hand off the handlebars. A lot of guys worked well into their seventies in the wood and metal yards of Belfast. The labour laws of Europe had squashed this opportunity in the shipyards and factories, but the privately owned timber merchants and scrap dealers were more than happy to take advantage of the elderly work ethic. There was something about this generation in that they had immunity to being work-shy, quite unlike their younger, often lazier career competitors.
“How goes it you old grafter? Why don’t you take a rest and pop in for a swift one?” shouted Mickey, waving over the old man who he’d never met nor seen before in his life.
“I’d love to but the wife wants me home for our youngest coming over with her new man. But you keep up the good work now. You show them now you hear,” shouted the old-timer as he eventually pulled past The Liberty at a snails pace. Like everybody else in this part of Belfast, the old fella knew exactly who Mickey was. Everybody knew who the Provo’s were, what they looked like, where they drank, where they lived, which ones you could have a good crack with and which ones to avoid. They were both feared and revered by the community, a little like the old time gangsters of sixties London. Good old boys who hurt only those that deserved to be hurt while protecting the community from the UVF and UDA - fighting for the greater good. This romantic viewpoint had no room for acknowledging maimed parents or orphaned children, instead focussing on the ‘cause’ and the justified end, ignoring the hell that was the predominant part of their means. The Provo’s were the modern day local heroes of a centuries old war, a fact that made Mickey smile with unbridled pride. People referred to the troubles as beginning in sixty-nine, or if they were really trying to prove their academic astuteness, they might reflect all the way back to the nineteen twenties. However, in reality the people of Northern Ireland had been killing each other for more than four hundred years, the last thirty-five or so were merely the icing on the cake in terms of weaponry and tactics.
“You be careful home now,” shouted Mickey Sheehan with a smile, just beginning to bask in his own self-importance when he felt the chill of the icy cold metal on the back of his head.
Please do comment and criticise - all help welcomed and greatly appreciated.
1
Mickey gulped the last of his pint whilst waiting for the long overdue arrival of his Commanding Operations Officer. Stuart Cullen was at least three pints late, forcing Mickey to grease the gears with a few more than he’d originally planned, but what the hell, he knew what he was doing. Never to be accused of being a snappy dresser, he wore black drainpipes, a blood coloured short-sleeved shirt and ash black, soft leather shoes. A black duffle coat lay on the floor beside him, doubling as a blanket for somebody else’s dog. He’d been filling his time trying to ram his little finger at speed through a beer mat. He stunk of Fahrenheit.
He pulled a thumb of soft tobacco from his battered leather pouch and without thought licked a rolly together in less than ten seconds. He slid from his stool and wandered towards the double doors that spilled outwards from the bar and onto the grey slab stone pavement. Striking a match with his right hand whilst shielding the flame with his left, Mickey lit his cigarette as he stared out into the darkness of the Falls Road, eyes scanning for a mixture of Cullen, Loyalists and the British Army. It was highly unlikely that the latter two would be seen on the road given the current climate of peace, but old habits diehard when a quick glance could make the difference between waking up the next day and, well, not.
The road was wet even though the rain had stopped almost an hour before. It was a little after five in the evening, but the sun had all but disappeared at about the same time as its archrival the rain. The orange glow of the streetlights skipped and shimmered along the water filled potholes and dips of the Falls. Mickey shook his head at the image and let out an almost nihilistic laugh. Here he was, stood outside The Liberty Public House in the heart of Catholic west Belfast, in the shadow of Black Mountain in the stronghold of the Provo’s, and the street was covered in an orange glow; just think of the irony. Fucking British Government probably installed the orange bulbs deliberately, having a good laugh at us dumb micks from their cushy little offices in Whitehall.
A man in his late sixties slowly pumped his legs as he pedalled past the recently modernised swimming baths that sat directly across the road, proudly displaying its new covered slide that looped outside for a few thrilling metres before darting back indoors. The rusty pushbike looked to be at least thirty years old, with the old man finishing off the nostalgic look with a pair of shiny bicycle clips and a thick woollen scarf. A rough cloth satchel swung from side to side across his back as the pensioner pedalled, his heavy-duty boiler suit and weatherproofs chafing loudly as he slowly moved forward in short, strained bursts. His hand kept slicking back the last of his grey hair as it was blown in all directions by the still damp wind; every time he did so the bike wobbled precariously as he took one hand off the handlebars. A lot of guys worked well into their seventies in the wood and metal yards of Belfast. The labour laws of Europe had squashed this opportunity in the shipyards and factories, but the privately owned timber merchants and scrap dealers were more than happy to take advantage of the elderly work ethic. There was something about this generation in that they had immunity to being work-shy, quite unlike their younger, often lazier career competitors.
“How goes it you old grafter? Why don’t you take a rest and pop in for a swift one?” shouted Mickey, waving over the old man who he’d never met nor seen before in his life.
“I’d love to but the wife wants me home for our youngest coming over with her new man. But you keep up the good work now. You show them now you hear,” shouted the old-timer as he eventually pulled past The Liberty at a snails pace. Like everybody else in this part of Belfast, the old fella knew exactly who Mickey was. Everybody knew who the Provo’s were, what they looked like, where they drank, where they lived, which ones you could have a good crack with and which ones to avoid. They were both feared and revered by the community, a little like the old time gangsters of sixties London. Good old boys who hurt only those that deserved to be hurt while protecting the community from the UVF and UDA - fighting for the greater good. This romantic viewpoint had no room for acknowledging maimed parents or orphaned children, instead focussing on the ‘cause’ and the justified end, ignoring the hell that was the predominant part of their means. The Provo’s were the modern day local heroes of a centuries old war, a fact that made Mickey smile with unbridled pride. People referred to the troubles as beginning in sixty-nine, or if they were really trying to prove their academic astuteness, they might reflect all the way back to the nineteen twenties. However, in reality the people of Northern Ireland had been killing each other for more than four hundred years, the last thirty-five or so were merely the icing on the cake in terms of weaponry and tactics.
“You be careful home now,” shouted Mickey Sheehan with a smile, just beginning to bask in his own self-importance when he felt the chill of the icy cold metal on the back of his head.