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(c)1992 from one words one lip... "looktothe

velvetthecrow

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By Arthur P. Vavoudis Please do not copy I am a very poor author. "Look to the Right a new light comes a new enlightenment enter under the light understanding the light. The same Son but a new understanding that it is the Earth that revolves around to day a new spin from yesterday, yes turn day from the old enlightenment enter under the new light the new day, morning yesterday ignore the dark. De Nigh t and you can not see. Turn Night to day." I added some hypotheticaly derived conjecture as a form of parabel to the origens of some of these christian discoveries I made in Philology from a real miracle I prade for. To get back my faith in Paridise in heaven and I started seaing pictures on rocks that told these stories still I did not believe I thought they were created by indeans when I ruled that out because they started forming from calcium deposits on my shower door So I thought maybe wizards trained mold to make these pictures I considered the brain making sense of veg images but some were not veg and other people (not always) but often saw the same thing when I pointed it out and then pictures of actual surroundings I found current surrounding pictured on rocks a million years old. I still had daughts. Then I started seing the best photograph quality pictures on crinkled aluminum foil and the placement of leaves I actually for told two events from the images and disided to stop paying attention but I was then convinced we are in the imagination of God and if he can create this world he can create Parodice And I relized the crying Madonna Icon where I was cristend in Hempsted New York Saint Peters Cathedral (which I was not brought to see). Was not an optical alusion. This new book is the Wizard Stone that and my auto biography are the bassis of the Philosopher's Stone by my Daughter Joanne Kathleen Rowlings I probably should not name her before I have even met her but I and my family are receiving Death threats and would like to rase the money to imigrate anyware but the U.S.
 
This is impossible to read. The spelling is attrocious and the sentences poorly constructed at best. Especially the last. From what I can tell you haven't met your daughter yet. Huh?

Sorry,

JohnB
 
Webster created a new kind of class society. Which I do not appreciate. And I thought criticizing peoples punctuation and grammar was against forum rules.
 
Oh, sorry. I didn't realize you were one of those who post on a feedback site and don't want feedback unless it's positive. I just went back and read the forum rules and the guidelines for writers' showcase. There is nothing about not critiquing spelling and grammar. There is this in the guidelines, though: "Therefore as a writer you have a great opportunity to find out what people who read books really think about your work."

I do not wish to insult you, or ignite an argumentative fire. My comments were only to suggest ways you might improve the posted selection and are only my own opinion. You are certainly entitled to your own opinion of correct grammar and spelling and are also free to publish your own guide to writing, so writers may choose between your style and Webster's.

I will refrain from any criticism of your posts in the future.

JohnB
 
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