Cacaphony

[Peder]

You call this poetry?
What trash!
I can't even read it.
Why don't you write
proper English?
You can't even spell.
You'll never publish it
in print.
It doesn't even rhyme.
I don't read poetry, it's
for sissies
and girls in school.
And anyone can write
free verse
it's all over the place.
Not to mention sentence
fragments
boring boring repetitions
And how about putting
some commas.
Punctuation. Ya know?
Anyone else ever read
this stuff
or is it all just slapped together?
Plus boring boring endless
boring
I just yawn and go on by.

Peder
2-25-2013

 

[pontalba]

Love the "spellings", and repetition.

 

[Peder]

Love the "spellings", and repetition.

Thanks. There should be something for everyone in that poem. :lol:

 

[Conscious Bob]

Thanks. There should be something for everyone in that poem. :lol:

Certainly something for WolfLarsen.

 

[sparkchaser]

By any chance, was the working title of this An Ode to Wolf Larsen?

 

[Conscious Bob]

Or the Orgy of Critics, Dildos and Vibrators In The Book and Reader Forum

Set to music...

 

[Peder]

Certainly something for WolfLarsen.

Thanks. Maybe, all, but actually these were comments that have been directed towrd my own writing. /groan/ I especially love the sissy one -- delivered straight-faced directly across the table in a writing group.
Maybe I should be glad they have been so few.
Anyway . . .
Thanks, all, for looking.
Cheers