Acolyte
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The usual goes, please give me any and all criticism, good and bad, that will help me improve. That's why it's here. Admittedly, this is a bit less wordy and poem-esque than some of the other things I've posted here, but hopefully it still has a quirky meaning. Disclaimer: This isn't about relationships in general, but a particular brand of them, which I feel it is my born duty to rescue guys (and if the other way, girls) from. *grin*
Despotism
(9/25/03)
Ross Shingledecker
when he brings her flowers as a surprise
she whispers sweet nothings
he
weighted down by her ephemeral words
holds the door.
How strange a shape that this affection takes,
That unrequited love a despot makes.
Despotism
(9/25/03)
Ross Shingledecker
when he brings her flowers as a surprise
she whispers sweet nothings
he
weighted down by her ephemeral words
holds the door.
How strange a shape that this affection takes,
That unrequited love a despot makes.