Poem: Forever After...

[Wabbit]

A poem dedicated to my Friend Rach.


Forever after
The moon was La luna
The trees talked
And there was a crocodile that ate curry
David Duck
And bill Badger
came too
I miss you.

 

[piedro]

crocodile eating curry???????????

 

[Martin]

Hmmm, you want me to be honest?

Okay.

Don't like it. I liked all the other stuff you posted, but this one ... nope. Sorry.

Cheers, Martin

 

[RaVeN]

I guess you had to be there huh?

RaVeN

 

[Martin]

Prob'ly

Cheers, Martin

 

[third man girl]

I kinda like it. Especially the first three lines.
I imagine a rabbit, a badger and a duck pointing to the moon, and discussing it with the trees.
Not so keen on the crocodile line, I have to say.
But, next time I look at the moon, through the branches of the trees, (a sight oft seen through the tiny Velux window of my bathroom), I shall think of La luna . . .

Short, sweet poem, Wabbit.

Third Man Girl

 

[Wabbit]

Hmmm, you want me to be honest?

Okay.

Don't like it. I liked all the other stuff you posted, but this one ... nope. Sorry.

Cheers, Martin

Yes, I like people to be honest!

I'm glad you did like my other stuff! This one is different to what I normally write. And, yes, you probably DID have to be there Thanks for the imput, appreciate it! Thanks everybody else for the input too! Comments always welcome, good or bad!

Regards
Sillywabbit

 

[Martin]

Glad my input was appreciated. And please, Wabbit, post more writings!

Cheers, Martin