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Poem: If I just stopped

Wabbit

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If I just stopped

Stooped for a moment
A heartbeat
A second
A laugh
A smile
A soul warming smile of a friend
A craggy cliff of a cloud glowing with light
A knife cold winds whistling voice
A comforting silence
An unknown birds mysterious music
A trees dark arms embracing the sky
A daydream and a breathed sigh
A midnight black raven caught in flight
An ocean of green grass around sounding me
A sky burring bright with the suns dying light
A breath
A love
A sound
A peace
A wonder
A moment
So many heartbeats
So many moments
If I don't stop
If we don't stop
They are gone like snowflakes kissing the skin
 
Very good, Wabbit, it has a very nice pace, very fast, when you read it.

I liked it! Keep it up!

Cheers, Martin :D
 
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