Here is a story I am working on,
The gleaming water fell into the lake as it fell from the Ridges Mountains. Birds flew over the healthy trees. All was normal, all was peaceful, until.... A white horse broke from the bushes by the lake. Its rider, dead, hung only by the leather footholds of his saddle. In his neck prodded out a poisoned tip arrow with black, sleek, feathers. Birds and other critters scattered to and fro repelling from the horse.
The horse ran full speed along thee dirt path, as taught at its youth, and continued to run. The horse, tired and weak for not stopping for nearly a day. Its clean white hair and stance showed the glory of the creature. Its powerful legs sped through the dirt and ran towards the innocent village, that’s fate was about to change forever. The village that laid where tree met mountains, the village, Valnear.
Ridian picked up the wooden buckets full of water. Slinging his Shepard’s staff into the handles he hoisted up the buckets and placed the pole onto he neck and began to walk back to his mothers hut. Ridian was a young man not but six teen, his brown hair fell just before his blue eyes. Fit for his age Ridian enjoyed to play games with children and also other physically enduring activities. He wore a white robe and his sandals flopped onto the stone pavement of the villages roads.
As Ridian walked pass a dark alley way two shadowy figures walked out.
"Give us your coins and you wont get hurt kid." Said a demanding voice.
"Don't turn around either, 'k?" Said the second thief.
"Ah, but I am not but a poor boy, hell, these clothes have more money then I." Kidded Ridian. "Plus I'd never give money to you two jesters, you'd probably try to by weapons and poke your eye's out. Course your ol mums wouldn’t mind, they would be able to get back on ye for all the pranks you've pulled on there poor bodies. So, what trouble besides mugging me have you two got yourselves up to lately Teddy and Frum?"
Teddy and Frum where two brothers who acted both immature and fun. They where the same age as Ridian, and also his best friends. Teddy and Frum had a little more coins then Ridians family, yet that never really mattered. In Valnear, one always managed. Teddy had blonde hair and a thin body, along with his brother Frum. They where both quick and agile with there hands and feet.
"Always up to ruin are fun aye Ridian?" Frum said with a sorrowful yet joking voice.
"Are you always like that, you bully?" Teddy jested.
"Shut it and carry my water, at least then you might do something useful." Ridian said and slung off a bucket and tossed its contents at the twins. Wetted down the twins smiled playfully and jumped Ridian. Taking his other bucket, which had lost half of its load from the commotion. Teddy held him down as Frum poured it on Ridian. They jumped off and darted off to towards the lake. Ridian charged after the two, and soon cornered them on the docks.
"Whelp mates it ends here." Ridian said
"Nope." the twins said and jumped into the clear, cold, water.
"Idiots." Ridian muttered, as he shook his head. Then he too, jumped in.
The water enclosed Ridian ,as he opened his eyes under it. He noticed that he was starting to lose air. His arms moved to pull him up, yet despite his effort his body fell into the depths. Ridian gasped for help, yet only hundreds of little bubbles came. I know how to swim, what is going on with my body! His vision began to turn black, all was vanishing, Ridians last sight before he passed out was a glowing white fish.
[/*i
]Where am I...
What happened...
What time is it....
Ridians eyes slowly perked up yet when the light entered, he quickly shut them in reaction. He felt warm wool sheets covering him over his clothes that where put on him. His ,mouth felt dry, and his stomach empty.
"How long have I been out?", he muttered in a dry, weak, voice.
"Two days, here take this." came a rough female voice. It sounded familiar... Ridian finally opened his eyes and saw Nurse Willaflower, a big stern lady, with a heart of gold. Willaflower shoved a glass of water in Ridians hands. Ridian raised it up to his parched lips and sipped. With every drop Ridian felt his strength grow.
"Nurse...what happened to me...?" Ridian asked, his mind was blank, all he could remember was jumping in after Teddy and Frum...
"I'll tell you what happened. First off you drowned, Elder Ferrel says probably from dehydration. Secondly you are one lucky fellow, Frum noticed you didn't come up and went under while Teddy ran for help." Willaflower said. Ridian began to notice his surroundings. He was in the stone hospital, Willaflower was working on making medicines on her oak table.
"Oh," Ridian said confused.” does my mum know what happened?"
"Of course, you think we'd not tell ol mum where you have been for two days! Ha I got enough to worry bout sides parents gettin on me for healing there foolish young uns."
Ridian nodded and layed back on the feather pillow. He sat there letting his mind wonder on what happened. All he remembers was chasing the twins, drowning, and the strange fish.... 'what kind of fish was that?' Ridian thought. Just then his mom burst through the wooden door, she was a plump, kind lady who had curly black hair.
" Oh, my son, are you ok? I don't know what I would of done! Oh dearly me, I heard you talking through the door and I ran in."
"Mum no need to worry I'm OK." Ridian said reassuringly.
"I know it's just, what would i of done, I mean your father is off at war with Narnell, and I don’t think I could of survived with my other man gone." Said Sias, Ridians mom.
That’s right, Jay, I mean dad, is at war...Ridian thought.
The war was a classic good verse evil battle, the ones you read in stories. A king named Mulodovock, ruler of Karuw, wanted more land, power, and money. Mulodovock, sent his troops to attack Baltawin, a ruling nation of the country Falistin. The war has been raging on for over three years. Two years ago, Jay decided that it would be best to join the war and earn money fighting for his family. Teddy and Frums dad, Narnell, decided to join his friend.
The next night Ridian went home, ate a meal of fish, bread, a apple, and a mug of water. Feeling tired, he layed down in bed. He missed h is dad, the way he came home with unusual fish and made the greatest meals. Yet, he was gone. He listened to his mom, busy knitting clothes to sell. Coins where getting tight, even with fathers weekly income off 60 coins. Sias something cried herself to sleep worrying about father and money, Ridian wished they where rich, like the governor of Valnear, Forswoth. Foreswoth was rich, yet he was kind, not greedey, at least. [i[His daughter is also pretty, and kind Ridian thought to himself. Ridian had a bit of a crush on Cavie. She had long brown hair, a cute nose, and a smile that melted his heart.
Suddenly, a rock flew against Ridians window. Leaping from his bed, he hoisted up the old window of his top room, in the cottage. Teddy and Frum stood bellow, hiding behind some wine barrels. Teddy’s hand waved to get Ridian down here. Ridian jumped out the window, and landed skillfully on a box of hay, as he learned from experience.
"We got something to show ye." Frum said excited.
"Mad, weird I say it is." Teddy pitched in.
"Well what the hell is it you two?" Ridian asked annoyed.
"You'll have to see for your self mate." Frum said as he started down Lorgwood path, that lead to the Varnis ocean. The night was darker then usual, and the trees stood still, with no wind to push them. There footsteps echoed through the quiet night, not even the usual owls where heard. Arriving to the docks, Ridian saw a unusual thing, it was a glow, and the source, a thousand, white, glowing fish.
The gleaming water fell into the lake as it fell from the Ridges Mountains. Birds flew over the healthy trees. All was normal, all was peaceful, until.... A white horse broke from the bushes by the lake. Its rider, dead, hung only by the leather footholds of his saddle. In his neck prodded out a poisoned tip arrow with black, sleek, feathers. Birds and other critters scattered to and fro repelling from the horse.
The horse ran full speed along thee dirt path, as taught at its youth, and continued to run. The horse, tired and weak for not stopping for nearly a day. Its clean white hair and stance showed the glory of the creature. Its powerful legs sped through the dirt and ran towards the innocent village, that’s fate was about to change forever. The village that laid where tree met mountains, the village, Valnear.
Ridian picked up the wooden buckets full of water. Slinging his Shepard’s staff into the handles he hoisted up the buckets and placed the pole onto he neck and began to walk back to his mothers hut. Ridian was a young man not but six teen, his brown hair fell just before his blue eyes. Fit for his age Ridian enjoyed to play games with children and also other physically enduring activities. He wore a white robe and his sandals flopped onto the stone pavement of the villages roads.
As Ridian walked pass a dark alley way two shadowy figures walked out.
"Give us your coins and you wont get hurt kid." Said a demanding voice.
"Don't turn around either, 'k?" Said the second thief.
"Ah, but I am not but a poor boy, hell, these clothes have more money then I." Kidded Ridian. "Plus I'd never give money to you two jesters, you'd probably try to by weapons and poke your eye's out. Course your ol mums wouldn’t mind, they would be able to get back on ye for all the pranks you've pulled on there poor bodies. So, what trouble besides mugging me have you two got yourselves up to lately Teddy and Frum?"
Teddy and Frum where two brothers who acted both immature and fun. They where the same age as Ridian, and also his best friends. Teddy and Frum had a little more coins then Ridians family, yet that never really mattered. In Valnear, one always managed. Teddy had blonde hair and a thin body, along with his brother Frum. They where both quick and agile with there hands and feet.
"Always up to ruin are fun aye Ridian?" Frum said with a sorrowful yet joking voice.
"Are you always like that, you bully?" Teddy jested.
"Shut it and carry my water, at least then you might do something useful." Ridian said and slung off a bucket and tossed its contents at the twins. Wetted down the twins smiled playfully and jumped Ridian. Taking his other bucket, which had lost half of its load from the commotion. Teddy held him down as Frum poured it on Ridian. They jumped off and darted off to towards the lake. Ridian charged after the two, and soon cornered them on the docks.
"Whelp mates it ends here." Ridian said
"Nope." the twins said and jumped into the clear, cold, water.
"Idiots." Ridian muttered, as he shook his head. Then he too, jumped in.
The water enclosed Ridian ,as he opened his eyes under it. He noticed that he was starting to lose air. His arms moved to pull him up, yet despite his effort his body fell into the depths. Ridian gasped for help, yet only hundreds of little bubbles came. I know how to swim, what is going on with my body! His vision began to turn black, all was vanishing, Ridians last sight before he passed out was a glowing white fish.
[/*i
]Where am I...
What happened...
What time is it....
Ridians eyes slowly perked up yet when the light entered, he quickly shut them in reaction. He felt warm wool sheets covering him over his clothes that where put on him. His ,mouth felt dry, and his stomach empty.
"How long have I been out?", he muttered in a dry, weak, voice.
"Two days, here take this." came a rough female voice. It sounded familiar... Ridian finally opened his eyes and saw Nurse Willaflower, a big stern lady, with a heart of gold. Willaflower shoved a glass of water in Ridians hands. Ridian raised it up to his parched lips and sipped. With every drop Ridian felt his strength grow.
"Nurse...what happened to me...?" Ridian asked, his mind was blank, all he could remember was jumping in after Teddy and Frum...
"I'll tell you what happened. First off you drowned, Elder Ferrel says probably from dehydration. Secondly you are one lucky fellow, Frum noticed you didn't come up and went under while Teddy ran for help." Willaflower said. Ridian began to notice his surroundings. He was in the stone hospital, Willaflower was working on making medicines on her oak table.
"Oh," Ridian said confused.” does my mum know what happened?"
"Of course, you think we'd not tell ol mum where you have been for two days! Ha I got enough to worry bout sides parents gettin on me for healing there foolish young uns."
Ridian nodded and layed back on the feather pillow. He sat there letting his mind wonder on what happened. All he remembers was chasing the twins, drowning, and the strange fish.... 'what kind of fish was that?' Ridian thought. Just then his mom burst through the wooden door, she was a plump, kind lady who had curly black hair.
" Oh, my son, are you ok? I don't know what I would of done! Oh dearly me, I heard you talking through the door and I ran in."
"Mum no need to worry I'm OK." Ridian said reassuringly.
"I know it's just, what would i of done, I mean your father is off at war with Narnell, and I don’t think I could of survived with my other man gone." Said Sias, Ridians mom.
That’s right, Jay, I mean dad, is at war...Ridian thought.
The war was a classic good verse evil battle, the ones you read in stories. A king named Mulodovock, ruler of Karuw, wanted more land, power, and money. Mulodovock, sent his troops to attack Baltawin, a ruling nation of the country Falistin. The war has been raging on for over three years. Two years ago, Jay decided that it would be best to join the war and earn money fighting for his family. Teddy and Frums dad, Narnell, decided to join his friend.
The next night Ridian went home, ate a meal of fish, bread, a apple, and a mug of water. Feeling tired, he layed down in bed. He missed h is dad, the way he came home with unusual fish and made the greatest meals. Yet, he was gone. He listened to his mom, busy knitting clothes to sell. Coins where getting tight, even with fathers weekly income off 60 coins. Sias something cried herself to sleep worrying about father and money, Ridian wished they where rich, like the governor of Valnear, Forswoth. Foreswoth was rich, yet he was kind, not greedey, at least. [i[His daughter is also pretty, and kind Ridian thought to himself. Ridian had a bit of a crush on Cavie. She had long brown hair, a cute nose, and a smile that melted his heart.
Suddenly, a rock flew against Ridians window. Leaping from his bed, he hoisted up the old window of his top room, in the cottage. Teddy and Frum stood bellow, hiding behind some wine barrels. Teddy’s hand waved to get Ridian down here. Ridian jumped out the window, and landed skillfully on a box of hay, as he learned from experience.
"We got something to show ye." Frum said excited.
"Mad, weird I say it is." Teddy pitched in.
"Well what the hell is it you two?" Ridian asked annoyed.
"You'll have to see for your self mate." Frum said as he started down Lorgwood path, that lead to the Varnis ocean. The night was darker then usual, and the trees stood still, with no wind to push them. There footsteps echoed through the quiet night, not even the usual owls where heard. Arriving to the docks, Ridian saw a unusual thing, it was a glow, and the source, a thousand, white, glowing fish.