Vespertilio91
New Member
This is the latest in my poetic writings. Please take time to read it (won't take long) and review. I need to know how I write and suggestions for change would be a nice suprise.
Salvaged Soul
Remnant of the curse
Trapped inside the tomb
When rays caress souls.
Strike at nightmare's hour.
Corsair of the blood,
Feast in moonshadow
Bound by reborn greed-
Drink the wine of life.
Frequent of the night,
Etiolated.
Disappear to sleep-
Thy coffin awaits.
Salvaged Soul
Remnant of the curse
Trapped inside the tomb
When rays caress souls.
Strike at nightmare's hour.
Corsair of the blood,
Feast in moonshadow
Bound by reborn greed-
Drink the wine of life.
Frequent of the night,
Etiolated.
Disappear to sleep-
Thy coffin awaits.