You know the saying :

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I said the, trees in June look like tomato olives,I said the, monsoon season looked like tulip dasies and doggies,I said the, motor running in the car needs gas,I said the, diaper babies crying need time to think,I said the, nimbus clouds forming over the rain in spring,I said the, girl of twenty three eyed me in the club,

She said the, pick-up line for every man is tool,She said the, look in my face was one she can’t ignore,She said the, tie around my neck looked fine,She said the, time to make a move on her was now,She said the, nose on my face looked really cute,

The, chance encounter led to love and marriage,
The, babies had were plenty and good,
The, story doesn’t ever end but does.

 

[Jason Evans]

I really enjoyed this treatment and structure to capture the sweeping, and sometimes conflicting, nature of a relationship.