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Thank You Ice: Yes, I have seen the option that you have mentioned, but what concerns me is that the pages where other people can see my posts, too, and perhaps repsond with an opinion, is where they do not seem to be available, at least the last time I searched them out. I'll look again-It...

Hello, I recently, say, two weeks ago, sent a private note to Darren regarding two missing posts that I placed in the Writer's Showcase last January. They are gone and I wondered how this had occured, and why. #1) was "Prologue: Bloodline of the Annunakii" and #2) was "Foreword: Into the...

The Origin of the Vampire Legend I enjoy the energy of your words, albeit, with the inconsistencies and confusion in the thought process. Keep it up, and try to focus completely upon the outcome that you want, and eliminate any future or past associations that muddle those links. If you have a...

Clarification Thank you for your opinion. It might be clearer for you, if you read Part One, which I posted a few weeks ago, and after that go back further to Prologue: "Bloodline of the Annunakii" and you will get a clearer idea of the story line. It will take some patience, but taken...

"Bloodline of the Annunakii" A greater disgrace carries them. On their home world, they had been shamed as “Untouchables” by their own race, the product of a rigid caste system. For the Kingdom that would be established for them and their progeny, they have come to rule, triumphant over...

Zounds! Tommy you old war-meister! If this is an expose, it was poignant, to say the least. I recognized the theme;oft-repeated in literature, and especially in movies of the day. The world needs more contrition from the Illuminated Rothchilds of the planet who offer up mankind as a...

“Bloodline of the Annunakii” BOOK ONE Foreword: Into The Past It is 2011. A passive rebellion brews in the mean streets of the world as questions to the oppressive CUSA world government remain unanswered and evasion is the order of the day. Weather, the signature creation of the...

Website Research Hello- From my investigation, I have seen that every publisher has his or her individual requirements, and to generalize is a first mistake. Go online. Punch in the names (the list of probable publishers that will accept your work) and search each one for their current format...

Wordiness...can be irritating Breaca, Thank you for the review-yes, as I mentioned to Halo, I have done considerable editing since the posting (oh, for more chances to edit) and the MS has been pared down quite a bit. I am approaching 2 months since the submission (unsolicited) and am becoming...

Thanks...You're the second review! Halo-I have to say all of this in under 15 minutes, as I have learned the hard way. Yes, the editing never ends, and a considerable amount has taken place since the posting took place. Everything that I do, teaches me more about what I need to fix with the...

"Coffee...YUM!" Libre-Very enjoyable read. Is it for a magazine article, novel...personal enjoyment? I especially relate to the coffee memory, as it was big in our Kentucky home and later when we moved. I was not allowed coffee until I was eleven, I think. They said it would stunt my growth...

A Good Idea Malena-I believe that flashbacks (FBs) are necessary in almost every fictional account. Unless it is an action-oriented, present time description, then it requires reflection. FB's are that reflection, and the reason that stories are made, and make good fiction. I need to...

Heloooo-Poppy! Poppy- Welcome to the Book Forum. Where did you get that piece at the bottom? Was that John Lennon, "A Spaniard in the Works"? Or a quote from him? Frederick

Here is the second and last part-Frederick "Bloodline of the Annunakii" “Oh…No! They’re here!” was all that she could find to say at the sight of the alien craft. Seeing the silvery ships crowding in the sky, like beetles swarming over a carcass, was enough to cause Elly to quickly step...

I am submitting this in two parts-threads-to get it all in-Please let me know what you think of it. I am ready (for the most part) to find a publisher. Thanks! Prologue February 2012: Trinidad “I am not going to feel guilty about this!” Sam shouted at the wind. “We all get what we ask...

Darren: I forgot about the 15 minute limit, and had to shorten my text (Writer's Showcase). Time ran out before I got a chance to fix it, and it is all jumbled together, so please do me a favor and delete it. It is called Novel:"Bloodline of the Annunakii". I would appreciate it very much sir...

Dear Anyone- I would like to remove a posting to the Writer's Showcase, and have written to the contact number, page, whatever, and I have done so twice and no one has responded. I checked for the rules but didn't locate them, to see if it was a no-no to remove any posting (there is a box at...

Reply Hello- I had written a long reply to your question of time, (But it mysteriously disappeared, right before my eyes) and it was based on quantum theory of the wave-particle understanding. See an electron and you have particle form: photograph an electron and it appears as a wave. Percetion...

Reply Try the books of Marion Zimmer Bradley-"The Mists of Avalon," an Arthurian legend treatment, is very well done, and the best I have yet to read. There is something about that particular legend that I find intriguing-compelling too. I have read that the whole Merlin thing is...

Hello- I am in California, and I wonder if I may ask a question. I have received an announcement from Liverpool, saying that I won a butt-load of money in the "UK National Lottery" and suppose it is a "fishing" email or the like. They have not asked for money or info, and I tried a "reply to,"...