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B. R. Myers: A Reader's Manifesto (criticism)

Sitaram

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A Reader's Manifesto: An Attack on the Growing Pretentiousness in American Literary Prose (Paperback)
by B. R. Myers

I was looking at a copy of B.R. Myers’ Manifesto and was tempted to purchase it. He does in places harshly criticize Annie Proulx, whom I admire. My admiration for Proulx made me hesitate to purchase the book. Yesterday was the release date of the Brokeback Mountain DVD. I was at the store when the doors opened to purchase my copy (widescreen version). One must admit that Proulx has some kind of exceptional ability to come up with a 30 page story which has such repercussions. Also, she won a Pulitzer for The Shipping News.

I understand what Myers is talking about in his criticisms, regarding, for example, admirable or favorite sentences. I personally enjoy savoring a work at the sentence level, but not everyone feels this way. If I remember correctly, Myers argues that the book should be such a page turner that the average reader would not dwell long at the sentence level. Perhaps Myers sees sentence level reading or writing as a cop-out to mask other short-comings.

I am reminded of my college study of Bach’s St. Matthews’ Passion. I learned that the lowest note of the entire work occurs upon the word death. How many listeners in the audience will catch that? None, I would imagine, unless they were following along with the score in hand. Still, it is a profound touch which delights the beholder who discovers it. One of the few subtleties I caught while reading Tolstoy’s War and Peace, 40 years ago, was that early in the novel, one character says Je vous aime (“I love you” in the courtly but alien language of French), but much later in the novel says, Ya vas lyublyu (“I love you”, in native Russian, now that he is in touch with his roots). Sigmund Freud wrote how breathtaking it was when he first laid eyes upon the Parthenon, having only read about it as a school child, but now to see the palpable reality of its existence outside a textbook's pages. Yet, only an architect will realize, after careful measurements, the even more beautiful and overpowering fact that the Parthenon was built, not perfectly straight, or it would have appeared crooked to the curved retina of the human eye, but rather, was built with a slight curvature, so it might give the illusion of straightness and perfection; perfection achieved through imperfection, yet a technique which evades the first glance.


Myers describes an interview with Toni Morrison where Oprah Winfrey finds certain passages obscure. Morrison quipped something like “That, my dear, is called reading” (paraphrasing). I understood Morrison’s retort to mean that the fault lay not with the author’s obscurity, but with the reader’s density. Myers argues that writers of bygone eras, such as Conrad, wrote with a clarity accessible to an Oprah Winfrey.

Perhaps authors should lay down that same gauntlet of challenge which the Prophet Mohammed brandished for his Qu’ran, daring anyone to produce one Surah (book, chapter) which equals his style. It is easier to criticize The Shipping News than it is to produce something comparable.

Quite obviously, the Nobel Prize committee criticized Pynchon’s work by considering Gravity’s Rainbow in 1975 but then declining to award it, and bestowing no award for that year.

We can point to books which are very popular, best sellers, and say that they are not good literature. We can also point to great literature which is totally ignored in its day, but is rediscovered by some subsequent generation. Faulkner and Hemingway criticized each other in their day, yet we see both as different but great writers.

http://citypaper.net/articles/091400/ae.books.shtml


(start of excerpt)

The first Nobel Prize in Literature was awarded in 1901 to one Sully Prudhomme. Since then, the Academy has chosen many deserving authors such as Thomas Mann (’29), Halldór Laxness (’55), Samuel Beckett (’69), and Joseph Brodsky (’87). However, one must question the judgment of any committee that can give Derek Walcott or Toni Morrison a million bucks (1992 and ’93 respectively) yet allow James Joyce, Jorge Luis Borges and William Gaddis to die in near-obscurity.
...
Solzhenitsyn got one but they ignored Nabokov..


Pynchon’s agent should fax the "Byron the Bulb" excursus from Gravity’s Rainbow to Stockholm immediately. That passage alone qualifies him for the award.

http://www.themodernword.com/gr/Book1.htm

http://www.themodernword.com/gr/main_index.htm

http://www.amazon.com/gp/cdp/member...-0562220?_encoding=UTF8&display=public&page=3

By the way, when this book [Gravity's Rainbow] was denied the Nobel Prize in 1975, it became the first and last year that no prize was awarded for literature. It became the nil year, the entropic year, and how very Pynchonesque!


Stephen King’s genius can be found in many places, particularly in his ability to take the metaphorical and make it literal. It’s a literary device that, in our time, only Franz Kafka and Dr. Seuss managed to pull off so well. In the short story "The Man Who Would Not Shake Hands," there’s an inscription carved in stone and aglow above a fireplace: "It is the tale, not he who tells it." Just this once, the [Nobel] Academy should bestow the award upon someone people actually read.

(end of excerpt)

http://www.cnn.com/books/news/9909/29/nobel.prize/index.html


http://www.amazon.com/gp/product/customer-reviews/0971865906/103-1404912-0562220


(start of excerpts)
Almost 60 years ago, George Orwell wrote the immortal 'Politics and the English Language'. That essay has taught three generations of journalists the virtues of plain writing and the desperate need for clear thinking. Now B.R. Myers has given the same priceless gift to the novelists of the world. The American literary novel may seem to be in terminal decline, but if the next generation of writers should read this book and learn its lessons, American literature may have a bright future after all.



(one poster shares with us their reading list of choices):

Myers tells you which writers to steer clear of. Unfortunately it doesn't tell you much about writers to seek out. Following Myers's principles, I will recommend a few from my own shelves.

1. In Cold Blood, by Truman Capote. Capote's non-fiction novel is the best thing he ever wrote and is a model of great narrative. No American writer today can touch him.

2. Ragtime, by E. L. Doctorow. Doctorow tells his story using, in part, real-life characters. It is irresistible. Time magazine called it one of the 10 best novels of the 1970s, and they were right.

3. Valley of the Dolls, by Jacqueline Susann. Don't laugh. Susann wrote direct, clear-eyed prose about the hell show business is on women. And what a great story. As the Salon Guide to Contemporary Literature rightly observes, she has had many imitators but no equals in this genre. Excellent.

4. Tales of the Unexpected, by Roald Dahl. Dahl writes unforgettable short stories. They stick in your mind because they are so damn good and exciting to read.

5. The Feast of Love, Charles Baxter. What love feels like: the joy, the jealousy, the mystery, the secrets. What does it all mean? Baxter gives us hints in these always exciting, often erotic stories.

I could go on, but these give you an insight into what Myers's is onto. Great popular writers can be damn good, literary-wise. Do a little exploring and you will find this to be absolutely true.

(end of excerpts)
 
Who besides Annie Proulx, does Meyers say we should avoid, and why? Is he saying her work is too difficult for the average modern reader?
 
I shall purchase Myers’ Manifesto this afternoon, read through it, and list those authors who receive negative criticism, as well as those praised.

Stephen King’s book on how to write a novel mentions a list of recommend readings in which Proulx is listed twice.

Proulx and King both mention that a novel may be written in as little as three months. I ask myself how much profundity may be generated by any author in such a short time. Myers’ big gripe is prose that is superficial or pretentious.

Myers was attacked by various writers and critics on an ad hominem level. The paperback Manifesto contains an Appendix with some of his rebuttals.

I am suddenly reminded of Lawrence Durrell’s Alexandrian Quartetet which I devoured at age 16. That was such a magical time for me. I also remember being age 11 and finding an old copy of a Tarzan adventure by Edgar Rice Burroughs, which I could not put down until I had read it cover to cover. Are these examples of great literature? I do know I had a wonderful time when I read them. As a justice once said "I don't know the definition of pornography, but I know what I like."


I do not often see The Alexandrian Quartet for sale these days in bookstores, though it is listed on the Internet.

The following link demonstrates that there has been quite a bit of scholarship generated by Durrell’s writings.

http://www.durrell-school-corfu.org/bibliog/bibalexandria-a.htm

Perhaps one measure of an author to be placed upon the scale’s balance is the amount of scholarship which the book inspires in subsequent generations.
 
It is a curious coincidence that my late step-grandfather-in-law was also named Myers (no relation to the author of the Manifesto).

Grandpa Myers was an avid reader, and also an enthusiastic Anglophile who admired and emulated all things British.

It took me a while just now to remember his favorite author's name.

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Harry_Paget_Flashman

Grandpa was an officer in the Marines both during World War I and World War II.

I am certain that the adventures of Flashman reminded him somewhat of his own escapades.

I am reminded of the Flashman series as an example of something quite popular and appealing to a certain type of person in a certain era, but quite possibly not the greatest of literary works.
 
Sitaram said:
I do not often see The Alexandrian Quartet for sale these days in bookstores, though it is listed on the Internet.

The following link demonstrates that there has been quite a bit of scholarship generated by Durrell’s writings.

http://www.durrell-school-corfu.org/bibliog/bibalexandria-a.htm

Perhaps one measure of an author to be placed upon the scale’s balance is the amount of scholarship which the book inspires in subsequent generations.
Sitaram,
I'm very glad to see your mention of The Alexandria Quartet. I wasn't aware that it had attracted that much scholarship. I also enjoyed it very much way back when, and have not heard much of it since then. I'm also reminded of the Dance to the Music of Time series by Anthony Powell back then, which started out well but ended up much more pallid I thought. Powell was compared to Proust in the NYT!. :eek: That's enough perhaps to give Myers a fit!
In any event, the Durrell quartet is on the shelf of my local small bookstore and I'm glad to see you mention it. Maybe your post will bump up its popularity here.

Peder
 
Myers' Manifesto sounds just as narrow-minded, or narrowing, and judgmental, as Harold Bloom - only the other way round?

I like the Toni Morrison quote. Sometimes it's nice to just read a book the whole way through, for relaxation and enjoyment, but the reads that really stay with you - the ones that touch you, affect and challenge your thoughts and feelings, change your life even - are the ones where you stop and think, re-read passages, and contemplate what you read. It'll be interesting to read the Myers lists...


However... the Nobel prize for literature of 1975 was awarded to Eugenio Montale. The only times when no award has been given out were during the world wars; and if you count the time they awarded the prize to Jean-Paul Sartre (1964) and he refused it. http://nobelprize.org/literature/laureates/index.html

I do agree that the Nobel prize has been awarded very unevenly - to those who don't deserve it, and not to those who do. But then, I feel that the Nobel prize itself enjoys too good (and self-righteous) a reputation, which it frankly hasn't earned. If it would be the most important literary prize, it should award the most important authors - e.g. Joyce, Proust, Rilke and Pynchon, and many others. Just my little Swedish POV rant (I don't like ABBA either... :rolleyes: )


*mrkgnao*
 
Terribly sorry about the misinformation on Pynchon and the Nobel Prize in 1975.

I purchased Myers' Manifesto yesterday and shall be posting more excerpts.

He begins his attack my criticizing Proulx from the outset. And the very first sentence that he criticizes is in the very paragraph I chose to showcase and comment on at length

http://www.thebookforum.com/forums/showthread.php?t=280&highlight=dabs



Sitaram said:
I have been spending a lot of time lately reading and thinking about The Shipping News by Annie Proulx.

http://www.annieproulx.com/forum/phpBB2/viewtopic.php?t=241

Here are some excerpts of my thoughts:



I am so impressed with Brokeback Mountain that I have purchased The Shipping News and am just now beginning to read it.

I am particularly struck by one paragraph early in the work:



It was spring is certainly passive compared with spring has sprung and reminiscent not of Chaucer's nascent "Whan that April" but of Eliot's evanescent April as "the cruelest month."

The wind is active, but violent, striking. Twigs are not budding branches but dead, fallen branches.

Slanted rain is merciless, wind-driven, bent on pursuing us even under whatever frail shelter we might seek.

struck flint is a prelude to fire, but in the past tense, and passive, suggesting failure; a spark, some smoke, but no fire. Damp, dark and cold are motives for fire.


Yet, the final pellucid thought at the end of day is the recognition and admission of our weariness and desire for sleep.


http://www.vitacost.com/science/hn/Herb/Coltsfoot.htm

We notice that the leaf is heart-shaped. A colt is an immature horse. But horses are said to have a hoof and not a foot. Foot suggests human. A horse's leg in a ditch suggests a broken leg, and a horse with a broken leg must be "put down."

Of course, everything that I am saying here is quite possibly the artifact of over-eager analysis. Yet, still, these phenomena are present in the reader's field of vision, even if they are only optical illusions, never intended by the author. And the potential energy of such phenomena are ever-present, waiting to be harnessed by the author's artistic will.


The riffling of cards in a single hand (not two hands) suggests a clever conjurer and his slight-of-hand. The hand is chalk white because it is death's hand. I am reminded of Wallace Stevens' line from Sea-Surface Full of Clouds


furious dabs of tulips stuttering in gardens.

Furious sets the tone of anger.

The artists' dab, like a cook's dash, denotes a minute quantity and insufficiency of intentionality; a vague afterthought.

What is it that those tulips desire to tell us with such difficulty?

There are worlds within the words of Annie Proulx and there are other worlds within me, a particular reader, or in any reader. When she writes and I read, then, there is a collision of worlds and sparks and smoke result. At times there may be fire and light.


Scales of degree may be recognized in many qualities such as the volume and pitch of sound, which is sometimes called music, hardness in rocks, intelligence, temperature, pressure, and so on.

We characterize things as tragic or comic. We place like phenomena side by side and construct our own scales of measure.

It is not surprising if we seek an MCP (microcosmic cameo passage) in works of literature. After all, we are doing the same thing when we turn our attention to the nature of space-time and mattergy and seek a GUT (Grand Universal Theory), a simple formula of relativity or string theory.

The Ashley Book of Knots motif

Speaking of string theory, most chapters in The Shipping News are headed by illustrations and quotations from The Ashley Book of Knots.

I feel the urge to give some witty, apocryphal etymology for the word knot such as "knowing not" how to untie it.

Here is what Clifford W. Ashley says about knots:




Well! What can we, the readers, make of all this? What should we make of all this?

The character Quoyle is certainly described as a large lump of flesh resembling the Latin etymology of nodus.

A sign or symbol may start out as a euphemism. I am thinking of the phrase "stem the rose" in Brokeback mountain. "Rose" is most likely a euphemism for anus. This same euphemism is used by Thomas Pynchon in Gravity's Rainbow, where it speaks of the "rose bud".


Joyce's Finnegans Wake comes to mind as the most extreme example of pure esoteric, implicit symbolism, devoid of simple narrative plot as we understand it. So we might set Finnegans Wake at one extreme of our esoteric scale. At the opposite extreme is the plain story, which is all narrative and no symbolism. If I narrate to you some true event from my life, which has actually happened, in simple, straight forward language, then we may assume that there are no symbols or hidden meanings or innuendo. If however, I narrate to you a dream which I had, then that narrative may contain symbols and hidden meanings placed their by the subconscious.

Proulx certainly seems encyclopedic in her motif from the book of knots.

Let us, for convenience sake, refer to our now famous MCP (microcosmic cameo passage) from chapter 3 of The Shipping News as the Coltsfoot Passage

The Coltsfoot passage is practically the third paragraph in Chapter 3, which is an account of an elderly couple planning their suicide.

How much analysis can any given work or author bear?

How much fiction can any reality endure?

Can one abide reality in the absence of all fiction?

I want to search on bricolage. My limited understanding of the word makes me think of a bird gathering scraps for a nest. I can see Annie Proulx as such a being, purchasing The Ashly Book of Knots for twenty five cents at a yard sale and then weaving it into a Pulitzer prize winning novel.

Quoyle's life certainly sounds like a rich dump-heap ripe with raw materials for the bricoleur.

The definition of quoyle is a line the ties a boat to a dock. The leftover line is laid out in a spiral of one layer so it can be walked on if necessary.

From what little I have learned of Annie Proulx through reading, she strikes me as an independent person of high principles, bent on going her own way of artistic independence, not to be lured by either fame or money.

She describes the highly paid speaker invitations as those of trophy hunters who do not care about her message, or what she stands for, but only about her fame, making her feel like some piece of meat on a rack.

She seems to choose not to ride out the fame of BBM, but to distance herself from it so she may get on with other work.

I suppose I would feel that my life has not been lived in vain if Proulx, Pynchon, and Kundera were to E-mail me and say "Not bad! Not bad!"

Imagine dying and going to heaven, and hearing God say "Not bad! Not bad!"

"Not bad" can be quite a tribute, coming from the right source.

How interesting that Proulx should treat sexual orientation in such a fashion in TSN, but it becomes such a bombshell of controversy for the public in BBM.

I always thought about a story being placed in a certain geographic setting. I never thought of a geographic setting as the source and inspiration for a story.


Shortly after I awoke, this morning, the thought hit me: Suppose Quoyle is Newfoundland itself (I mean, symbolically).

I was thinking about how Annie Proulx made all those trips to Newfoundland, gathering material. The fishing commerce on the verge of being irrevocably destroyed. The encroachment of modern technology. Perhaps the modern world sees Newfoundland as homely, ungainly, not fitting in.
 
A discussion of B.R. Myers “A Reader’s Manifesto”, which criticizes Proulx, DeLillo and several other authors, claiming that they are pretentious and obscure.

http://www.thebookforum.com/forums/showthread.php?t=10519



After Annie Proulx (public enemy #1), author Don DeLillo is number two on Myers’ “hit list”.

(start of excerpt, from page 86)

When Don DeLillo describes a man’s walk as “a sort of explanatory shuffle, a comment on the literature of shuffles”, I feel nothing; the word play is just too insincere, too patently meaningless. But when Nabokov talks of midges “continuously darning the air in one spot,” or the "square echo" of a car door slamming, I feel what Philip Larkin hoped readers of his poetry would feel: “Yes, I’ve never thought of it that way, but that’s how it is.” The pleasure that accompanies this sensation is almost addictive; for many, myself included, it’s the most important reason to read both poetry and prose.

(end of excerpt)

I shall make two observations here:

First, Myers seems to be in conflict, in the above passage, with something he states earlier, where he scoffs at the notion of having a “favorite sentence”, like Proulx’ “furious dabs of tulips stuttering,” from chapter three of “The Shipping News.” Yet now, he states (above) that the addictive pleasure of a phrase like “midges continuously darning the air in one spot,” is the most important reason to read prose or poetry.

Second, Myers frequently states, with a sarcastic tone of voice, that it is so easy for a phony author to throw various patently obvious contrivances of wordplay and ambiguity into their fiction to attract the attention of the Nobel Prize committee, or win the National Book Award. If it is so easy, then Mr. Myers must be a monument of integrity to refrain from stooping so low himself and scooping up a few of those awards. Yet Myers describes the great difficulty he had getting “A Reader’s Manifesto” published. Myers paid to have 300 copies printed, and then placed them for sale on the Internet, but none sold. Myers sent review copies to many publications, but only The Atlantic showed some interest after a long while, and with much posturing and negotiating on both sides.

Here are some links on Don DeLillo and his work.


http://perival.com/delillo/delillo.html

http://www.k-state.edu/english/nelp/delillo/

In 1999, he became the first American recipient of the Jerusalem Prize, awarded to writers "whose work expresses the theme of the freedom of the individual in society" and previously awarded to Milan Kundera, Mario Vargas Llosa, V. S. Naipaul, Graham Greene, Simone de Beauvoir and Jorge Luis Borges.

http://perival.com/delillo/ddawards.html

At the bottom of this next link are the officers and staff of the Don DeLillo Society, including their E-mail addresses.

http://www.k-state.edu/english/nelp/delillo/about.html

Out of curiosity, I shall E-mail each of them the link to this thread on Myers Manifesto at TBF, and solicit their reactions to “A Reader’s Manifesto.” I would also like to know what they think of Annie Proulx.

Remember, Stephen King cites two of Proulx’ works in his recommended reading list for aspiring authors. And, Myers, on page one of his book, complains that he would rather read King’s Carrie than some of the pretentious writers like Proulx and DeLillo. Myers complains that writers like Stephen King would never be considered for various prestigious awards.


Officers and staff of the Don DeLillo Society:

President:
Mark Osteen
Department of English
Loyola College in Maryland
4501 N. Charles Street
Baltimore, MD 21210
mosteen@loyola.edu

Secretary:
Marni Gauthier
Department of English
SUNY Cortland
P.O. Box 2000
Cortland, NY 13045-0900
gauthierm@cortland.edu
www.cortland.edu/english/faculty.htm

Treasurer:
Joseph Conte
Department of English
306 Clemens Hall
SUNY at Buffalo
Buffalo, NY 14260-4610
jconte@acsu.buffalo.edu
www.acsu.buffalo.edu/~jconte/

Editor:
Jeremy Green
English Department
University of Colorado at Boulder
226 UCB
Boulder CO 80309-0226
Jeremy.Green@Colorado.EDU
www.colorado.edu/English/facpages/green.html

Webmaster:
Philip Nel
Department of English
English/Counseling Services Bldg.
Kansas State University
Manhattan, KS 66506-6501
philnel@ksu.edu
www.ksu.edu/english/nelp/
 
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