Chico Cortez : An American Afterthought

[Lonesome Cowboy]

Though this is simply my personal opinion, I disagree with Occlith and CDM. I think the melodrama is what draws you into the story. For me, it made me want to find out what led up to this point and where the story would go from there. Again, just my personal opinion. I found it much like the beginning of a movie where they rope you in with an action scene in the first 2 minutes.

Well, that´s the kinda writing I like most Wenchy : "Hook ´em n reel ´em in". IMHO, action /adventure writers today simply cannot ignore the impact movies, TV and the internet have had on the tempo of narrative structure and consequently on readers, YOUNG readers.

As usual you´re right on the money Wenchy. BTW, don´t forget to check out my new story "Last Princess..." . I´ll be anxiously awaiting your comments.