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Wabbit

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Hi, this is a poem that I wrote awhile ago. I prefer not, mostly, to explain what my poetry is about. It will be the same with this one. I wonder what people will think of this :)

It's very a passionate poem. Hope somebody likes it!

A final word. This poem contains strong language so if you are under age 13 or you are easy offended by such things, please do not read. Well, here goes. Thank you for your attention and hope you like it.







Wake me...

**** me,
suck me,
touch me,
Bugger me.

Just wake me up before you go

Shit on me,
Spit on me,
Slap me,
Crap on me.

Just wake me up before you go

Scream at me,
Don't let go,
Let go,
Go.

Just wake me up before you go

kiss me,
Read me poems,
Show me pretty pictures,
Show me something beautiful.

Just wake me up before you go

Show me cold,
Show me heat,
Show me the things I never dreamed,
Show me love.

Just wake me up before you go

Just, please, wake me up.
 
How Bohemian of you. I liked it Wabbit. All it was missing was the bongos.

RaVeN

PS.... WAKE UP!!!
 
Before I go on, can you put the spoiler tags at each end of the poem- you can read the top of the poem quite easily from the top of the page.

I'm pretty rubbish at interpreting poetry but some random thoughts about how I see it...

The person in question feels dead to the world, and goes to the extremes of sodomy (is that the word or should it be carnality?) just to feel alive. As you progress through, sex makes way to courtship, then love.

The protagonist is still insecure about being alone at the end
 
Originally posted by SillyWabbit
if you are under age 13 . . . please do not read.
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You're being naive if you think that's going to stop them.
;)

How does this get past Darren's membership agreement?:

3.8 You agree that you will not use The Book Forum to post any material which is knowingly false and/or defamatory, inaccurate, abusive, vulgar, hateful, harassing, obscene, profane, sexually oriented, threatening, invasive of a person's privacy, or otherwise violative of any law.

Or am I being naive ?

Keep posting the warnings - I can't be seen reading this at work.

Third Man Girl
 
Re: Re: *** Content Warning ***

Originally posted by third man girl
You're being naive if you think that's going to stop them.
;)

How does this get past Darren's membership agreement?:

3.8 You agree that you will not use The Book Forum to post any material which is knowingly false and/or defamatory, inaccurate, abusive, vulgar, hateful, harassing, obscene, profane, sexually oriented, threatening, invasive of a person's privacy, or otherwise violative of any law.

Or am I being naive ?

Keep posting the warnings - I can't be seen reading this at work.

Third Man Girl
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I first asked for guidelines on this forum. Then just to double check I sent a private message to Darren ( containing my poem ) to double check it would be ok for this site, he said yes.

As for the membership agreement: My poem is not "knowingly false and/or defamatory, inaccurate, abusive, vulgar, hateful, harassing, obscene, profane, sexually oriented, threatening, invasive of a person's privacy, or otherwise violative of any law." Although, I guess thats subjective. It's a work of art about being passionate. It's a poem about living rather than existing like most people seem to do. Its a wake up call to a society that has become docile and safe.

Regards
SillyWabbit
 
Sorry. I seem to have pushed you into doing the very thing you didn't want to, i.e. explain what your poetry is about. :(

I would have classed

"**** me,
suck me,
touch me,
Bugger me."

as sexually oriented; but, hey, maybe these are Swahili words meaning 'Go pick daisies. Make a chain.' ;)

KeepWiting Wabbit

Third Man Girl
 
i am completely confused
:confused:

if "**** me and suck me" are not sexually oriented then what is?
any other similiar words have no priority , as in being 'more' explicit.
 
No matter what anyone says, I loved it, Wabbit. It is in no way offensive (at least, not to me), and I really highly enjoyed it!

But then again, I love porn. (For those of you not aware of my sense of humour, I'm kidding!)

Cheers, Martin :D
 
We're well aware of your sense of humor Martin.
(he's not really kidding, he just had to say that)

RaVeN
 
RaVeN, your neighbour called, you seem to have boiled her dog alive ... again.

She was not amused.

And stop hijacking Wabbit's thread!

Cheers, Martin :D
 
Well she didn't complain when I fixed her lunch!

Of course Wabbit's cool. That SHOULD have gone with out saying.

RaVeN
(going in search of someone else's thread to hijack)
 
*looks around*

I'm COOL??????????

:D

Raven and Martin said im cool

*giggles*

wow! I need to buy me a leather jacket! lol

Regards
Sillywabbit
 
YAY! :)

That's spamtastic! lol

spam.jpg


Regards
Sillywabbit!
 
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