Poem: Angel Tears

[Wabbit]

Angel Tears

Rain,
Feather soft,
Sound of the patter,
Its Angel's tears mother said,
I don't believe so, but it doesn't matter,
Her voice half remembered as I lay in the dark,
I like its wild peace,
The cool wet,
Like the touch of a lover never met,
Her voice half remembered in my ears,
Angel tears,
Listening to rains pretty rhythmic sound,
As I sink into sleep,
Dream bound.​

 

[VTChEwbecca]

That's really beautiful.

 

[Ashlea]

Very pretty.

 

[piedro]

i have heard of pulling a wabbit out of the hat. you keep pulling poems out of your hat! i have lost count how many you have posted

keep it going wabbit! kudos for you. this one gave me solace

why the tree like arrangement of words?

 

[third man girl]

That's so lovely, it makes me sad. Beautiful.

Third Man Girl

 

[RaVeN]

why the tree like arrangement of words?

What's amazing is to compose something of such worth and arrange it in the manor you did while at the same time doing the pee-pee dance.
You're one multi-tasking Wabbit!

RaVeN

 

[Martin]

Simply amazing. I envy you for your talent.

Cheers, Martin

 

[Wabbit]

Thanks everybody for the comments, means a lot to me!


Now I must go to bed, sleep, before I drop dead lol

Regards
SillyWabbit

PS: Raven, it's not easy doing the pee pee dance while writing a poem. The paper can get very soggy!

 

[h_carnahan]

It's a wonderful poem! I've read it before and didn't know what to say, but it has been raining alot recently and every time it does I think of your poem.

 

[Wabbit]

Thanks, and I am glad that I gave you something good

Regards
SillyWabbit

 

[tugger]

Wabbit!!!!

That is VERY nice. VERY nice!

My favorite line is "I like its wild peace." Wish I'd written it.

 

[Wabbit]

Thanks

I wish that I had written it is prob the best compliment I can get! lol Actually, feel that way about some of yours, so lucky I can return that compliment!

Regards
SillyWabbit