This is just a couple of poems I wrote, I'm very open to opinions and criticisms, you can say what you like without offending me.
The Curse
The blackened earth
Lies ashed with anger
Destruction has passed
Restoration must last
The Skeleton in Armour came
With his Army of Death
With his sword destroying all the earth
And leaving behind a dreadful curse
Upon his horse of iron bone
He struck the earth with death
Those that lived were taken by the Curse
But I alone survived that night
I lived to tell the tale
Of the Skeleton in Armour with his Army of Death
And his cursed sword form the very depths of Hell
The Power of the Angels runs through my veins
Only by me can the Curse be lifted
Only by me will the people awake
I alone must restore the earth
I cannot be overcome by this Curse
It all depends on me
O heaven save me
I pour out my power
Until none is left
No more ashen earth
Only the death of the Curse
This one is meant to be a song:
Forgotten
These crystal tears fall to the ground
They break and shatter without a sound
Their broken remnants on the floor
Their reason will live forevermore
Forgotten
No, they cannot be
How could you forget
When it's all you see
On the floor lies these red shatters of glass
All you can do is hope it will pass
You writhe in your misery and twist and turn
Trying to put out all the burn
Forgotten
Yes, you know too well
How they all left you
And laughed when you fell
You'll never add up to what they are
All your dreams, they seem so far
You'll never be anything more
You're merely shattered tears upon the floor
Forgotten
Yes, you'll always be
Your memory will fade
There will be nothing left to see
Marred with blood, broken on the ground
You lay motionless without a sound
Lifelessly you lay for all to see
Now you're nothing but a forgotten memory
Let me know what you think! All comments will be greatly appreciated!!
The Curse
The blackened earth
Lies ashed with anger
Destruction has passed
Restoration must last
The Skeleton in Armour came
With his Army of Death
With his sword destroying all the earth
And leaving behind a dreadful curse
Upon his horse of iron bone
He struck the earth with death
Those that lived were taken by the Curse
But I alone survived that night
I lived to tell the tale
Of the Skeleton in Armour with his Army of Death
And his cursed sword form the very depths of Hell
The Power of the Angels runs through my veins
Only by me can the Curse be lifted
Only by me will the people awake
I alone must restore the earth
I cannot be overcome by this Curse
It all depends on me
O heaven save me
I pour out my power
Until none is left
No more ashen earth
Only the death of the Curse
This one is meant to be a song:
Forgotten
These crystal tears fall to the ground
They break and shatter without a sound
Their broken remnants on the floor
Their reason will live forevermore
Forgotten
No, they cannot be
How could you forget
When it's all you see
On the floor lies these red shatters of glass
All you can do is hope it will pass
You writhe in your misery and twist and turn
Trying to put out all the burn
Forgotten
Yes, you know too well
How they all left you
And laughed when you fell
You'll never add up to what they are
All your dreams, they seem so far
You'll never be anything more
You're merely shattered tears upon the floor
Forgotten
Yes, you'll always be
Your memory will fade
There will be nothing left to see
Marred with blood, broken on the ground
You lay motionless without a sound
Lifelessly you lay for all to see
Now you're nothing but a forgotten memory
Let me know what you think! All comments will be greatly appreciated!!