Ok here's the first paragraphs in both styles. enjoy and tell me one you think i should write in.
1st person:
I ran through the playground towards the main gates by the front of school. My cold tears stung my face, and my hair clung infront of my eyes, blinding me. Everyone was looking at me, but what did i care? I just needed to get away.
"Alex! Alex wait!"
Charlie's voice rang through the courtyard. Why was he following me? i know he was meant to be my friend and i know he meant well. Couldn't he see i wanted to be alone? I carried on running towards the gates, though my steps were somewhat shorter, and my pace less quick.
Just as i reached the gates a hand grabbed my arm and swung me round, nearly making me loose my footing.There was charlie, staring at me, his breath fast and shallow.
"what's wrong alex? why didn't you stop when i called you?"
3rd person:
Alex ran through the playground towards the main gates. Her blonde hair stuck to her wet face as she cried. Faces turned towards her as she ran past, but she paid them no attention. She just wanted to get away.
"Alex! Alex wait!"
Charlie's voice rang through the courtyard as he chased after her. Alex cursed to herself as his voice reached her ears. Couldn't he see she wanted to be alone? why did he always have to follow her around? she knew she was his friend, but that didnt mean they had to be together all the time. she had other friends too. Alex carried on running in her bid for freedom, though her pace slowed considerably.
Charlie eventually caught up with her and grabbed her arm, swinging her round to face him.
"What's wrong alex? why didn't you stop when i called you?"
!!Thats all folks!!