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The Piggly Wiggly Capers (excerpt) "There she is" Ty McLeod eyes the 10th street Piggly Wiggly. Its doors open wide like a bumpkin´s barn ... " just begging to get robbed" he mumbles. Sitting behind the wheel of his Model T open cab pick up, chewing a fresh wad of "Bull Durham Tabac" , he...

Friggin eh, Helgi ! Friggin eh ! Anything you liked in particular ?

Hope you guys liked it. Any thoughts ?

KIOWA OIL and GAS LTD. Kiowa Oil and Gas Ltd. , formed in 1925 and struck gas in 1926. Kiowa´s oil discovery stimulated renewed interest in the Watchatee Valley field. In 1927 a pipeline was built to connect Big Indian Valley to Smokey River. In the 1920s Big Indian Valley became known as...

Friggin eh , WriterJohn. Friggin eh! That´s some quality writin´ right there dude. As you can see my reviews ain´t even in the same ballpark as your professional comments. "Ssshhomething," she said with a slur, "ate the monkeys. And shailors would find their heads, floating around the bay."...

I liked it dude. I bit too long for my taste (short attention span on my part) ,but all in all it was a nice read.

This story is an excerpt from "The Last Princess of the Swan River Cree" found in the short story collection "Peace Pipe Broken" by The Lonesome Cowboy.

Spot on John. I´m gonna edit that.

This is poignant, and not badly written, Thanks WriterJohn. Appreciate it. You call it the "Swan River Indian Village," yet she has never met a white man, apparently. So why would she think of it as an "Indian" village? Good point She's running across a prairie and a plain. Where...

Great point Occlith (it isn´t actually the whole story, y´know). I´m going to try it. Thanks.

Awesome, glad you liked this story CDA.

Well, that´s the kinda writing I like most Wenchy : "Hook ´em n reel ´em in". IMHO, action /adventure writers today simply cannot ignore the impact movies, TV and the internet have had on the tempo of narrative structure and consequently on readers, YOUNG readers. As usual you´re right on the...

This is the beginning of a longer story. The collection is called "Peace Pipe Broken". Any thoughts ?

Last Princess of the Swan River Cree (excerpt) Sprinting across the prairie was always easy for Snowbird. Her long legs never failed to fling her farther and faster across the grassy plains of her home ; the Swan River Indian Village. She imagined she was a mighty Cree warrior of the old...

Good call Wenchy.

Helgi ? How the heck did "Chico Cortez" get 450 views in 6 days ? WTF ? :eek:

:cool: quaint.

Right on the money Helgi, on both accounts. The words "bastardo" and "libertad" were chosen specifically for their closeness to their English equivalents , both in pronunciation and spelling. The buck stops at the prologue tho.

Thank you Occlith. That is a good observation that I must definitely consider. Would you mind taking a look at my other story "1921 Ford Roundabout" ? I´d like your comments on it as well. Thanks.