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Recent content by laboi_22

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    Obtunded

    Thanks seven. I appriciate the advice. I'm really excited about the story. Before I posted via internet, I did allow some friends of mine to read it. I got mixed reviews ie. to complicated with words. Some people enjoyed. I just tend to be long winded when I write. Do you think it was to wordy?
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    Obtunded

    Thanks Thanks so much for the advice. I need to work on my wordiness. I tend to overexplain at times. I will post more as time goes by. I have to develop it a little me. I truly appriciate the advice. Justin PS Erotica to follow!! LOL
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    Obtunded

    Wow I've been busy. Anyway I have been writing a little. This new project titled Obtunded has been fun. I welcome any and all input and please be honest. What better way to draft characters from my expierence as a nurse. My main character will become obtunded during an accident and his story is...
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    Help Please - The Essence of My Being

    Thanks Thanks guys for all the help. It is really appriciated. I also thought that maybe I didn't have enough setting. It's really hard to make my mind up about the beginning. I want it to be compelling and witty but I also want it to establish a lot in a little. I guess I need to work on that...
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    Help Please - The Essence of My Being

    Hello everyone. I would appreciate some help with a question I have. I have been working on this manuscript for a while now, and I have a question about the opening. Read the opening and tell me what you think. I’ve written several opening chapters, and this is what I’ve finally came up with...
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    Over the Rainbow

    Hello everyone. I'm so excited to be back online. Life is good despite the other problems. I've recently been working on a piece that I hold close to my heart. Please read the first chapter and tell me what you think. Thanks guys!! OVER THE RAINBOW CHAPTER 1 I’ll ask you for your...
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    Hurricane Rita

    Thanks everyone for the prayers and kind words. Just a quick update: I've lost my house to flooding. I live like 3 miles from the gulf, well I used to. For the storm, I stayed at my sister's house, I'm now back in Abbeville which got hit but not as hard as where I live in Esther. Since the storm...
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    Hurricane Rita

    Well here we go again guys. Hurricane Rita is due to ram sack the Texas coast by Friday. Louisiana however is at a great risk also. Our state will be placed on the Eastern side of this huge storm, and will get bashed pretty darned good. Rita is said to be the thrid largest and most powerful...
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    Old New Orleans

    Wow Novella that really sounds great. You didn't change the whole concept of the story you just changed around sentences and re-worded it. Thanks. Now I'll have to work on this piece and change it in the same way that you did just maybe a little diffrent. Hmmm Not sure how to make any better...
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    Old New Orleans

    Thanks cajunmomma. I plan to work more on it. I really like the plot of the story and I think that maybe it'll make a really interesting story.
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    Old New Orleans

    Thanks Ste for the info. I know that I can always count on you to tell me the truth. I have a few points to make though: first being a professor is very important and it does play a part in the story. Just not now. I had previously said that this was short and hard to follow. I didn't give you...
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    Ice, ice, baby!

    Happy B-Day!!
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    Dean Koontz

    Watchers is very good. Loved it!
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    Old New Orleans

    In the wake of terror along the gulf coast espeically in New Orleans I had to write. What better way to recall my past in New Orleans, and wish I was there now, out on Bourbon, than to write about it. A great city full of haunted tales and beautiful old buildings and historical sites, I just had...
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    psychiatric hospitals

    Speaking In Tongues : by Jeffery Deaver
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