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My journey Birds fly off to the winter sun, Musicians play their tunes, Sirens sound throughout the night, And my own leaving looms Ahead of me, and yet my path Is still unknown to me. I have no way of knowing, How good my life might be. Which path to take to lead me on, So...

A friend of mine asked for me to post his poem on here so he could see what other people thought of his poem. So this is his poem, exactly, i havnt changed anything. All replies welcome, good or bad. Estranged I'm at he door Don't push me through I'll make it on my own In the middle...

For some reason my favourite way of writing is small with no conversation. does anyone else prefer this way?? and would you call this a poem?? im a lil bit confused. Also any type of feedback, good or bad, coz im only a beginner... The wolf The wolf slunk through the darkness like a fish...

I collapsed onto my bed once I reached my flat. Pulling the duvet over my head I tried, vainly to block out her screams, as the car swerved, all those months ago. The smell of her perfume lingered in my nose. The repugnant echo of the smell I had once cherished. No miracle spray would ever clear...

KC still remembered how blue the sky had been that day. At that precise moment. It's funny what the brain decides to remember in greatest detail. You would think, perhaps, that KC's brain would have taken a mental snapshot of the million metallic shards flying all around in a deadly hail. Or...

Ive been told that my characters lack personality and i try reli hard to develop them and make them seem much more real ... bute i cant. I write down their thoughts and feelings and shock but i cant give them any depth. Does anyone have a certain way they let the audience relate with the...

im planning a story off and i have the first little section written out but im not sure whether i should write it in 1st person or 3rd. Its about a girl called alex, who will eventually die in the end, but i want to do a little bit at the end with her funeral and what her boyfriend says at the...

I've been on here for a week or so but i only just found this forum so i thought i would introduce myself lol. i'm emmer im 15 and i live in England where its always wet. hehehehe. i love reading (obviously) and i've been searching for a good forum for ages. i personally like fantasy...

im writing this in my spare time when im not at school and i need people input to help me improve this section of the first chapter. please please post ur ideas. Arica stumbled through the woods as sobs shook her body. The enclosed trees tried to trip her with thorns and brambles as she...